Please review a new San Francisco web site

[John Baron]

hey guys i am working on a new san francisco travel site
it does not have enough content in it yet , but the layout is done, be really happy to get your comments and please if needed be brutal
thanks



san francisco motels and info

cheers

 

[John Baron]

let's try it again

 

[Zaano.com]

To me it looks a bit dull and crowded. Try adding some color to the design.

 

[John Baron]

To me it looks a bit dull and crowded. Try adding some color to the design.

thanks for the review
any one else ?

 

[Traveler]

Very nice looking site on a great domain name. Looks awesome to me, It is obvious you have spent a lot of time on the site and I think it really looks professional. I don't have any real negative feedback, the only thing that comes to mind is that the google search might look better above the google ad block that it is currently under and maybe shift the block with the 6 hotels (bottom right) up a bit as well so they align better with the content on their left.

Very well done!

edit: Just FYI, I viewed your site in Firefox and IE and it looks the same in both without any issues.

 

[John Baron]

Very nice looking site on a great domain name. Looks awesome to me, It is obvious you have spent a lot of time on the site and I think it really looks professional. I don't have any real negative feedback, the only thing that comes to mind is that the google search might look better above the google ad block that it is currently under and maybe shift the block with the 6 hotels (bottom right) up a bit as well so they align better with the content on their left.

Very well done!

edit: Just FYI, I viewed your site in Firefox and IE and it looks the same in both without any issues.

Thanks for the detailed review ! rep !
thanks for telling me about the problem in the bottom , i just fix it .
cheers

 

[John Baron]

made some changes , be happy to get some more reviews

 

[Traveler]

Don't shoot me, but I think it looked cleaner before.

 

[John Baron]

Don't shoot me, but I think it looked cleaner before.

which area?

 

[Traveler]

which area?

It is hard to say exactly, many days have past since I saw the original site. If you have a screen shot of the prior version that you can PM me I will do my best and look at the new site and the old one and give a critique. It will only be my opinion, but I will take the time to look at the different versions and give you feedback if you want.

 

[scriptillusion]

The site looks outstanding and definitely a top notch domain name to go with it. If there was anything at all that could use improvement is maybe making more pronounced borders around the differing sections. Maybe make it similar to one of the other pages here: Entertainment | sfca where you have a light gray bar where the post date and such is located between posts. Nothing to drastic, but gives it enough to break the page up a bit.

Nice site though!

 

[John Baron]

interesting advise , i will try it
thanks a lot for your review ! rep !

The site looks outstanding and definitely a top notch domain name to go with it. If there was anything at all that could use improvement is maybe making more pronounced borders around the differing sections. Maybe make it similar to one of the other pages here: Entertainment | sfca where you have a light gray bar where the post date and such is located between posts. Nothing to drastic, but gives it enough to break the page up a bit.

Nice site though!

 

[andr69]

Well, I can't agree it's dull, The color is bright, the pictures are very nice, I like it!

 

[John Baron]

Well, I can't agree it's dull, The color is bright, the pictures are very nice, I like it!

thanks for the review

 

[builder40]

Clean site

Hi,

Nice clean site, with text in areas of 4x4 cm, easy to read,

maybe do 1. colourful graphic on the page somewhere, i always try to do 1 per page if i have aclean whait site.

 

[Larry Fling]

Looks nice and complete.. i would work on the logo a bit.. looks too amateurish..
Great site!

 

[alibaba]

not clean but certainly pro job

 

[The Restorer]

It looks pretty good.

Good work.

 

[JayMay]

First off I like the layout, looks very professional. Your logo seems a little blurry though, like its not the highest quality.

I think you have something though, really seems professional looking. Good job.

 

[Trens]

In contentwise the site is really good and on the design wise you have to improve it and make a good design.