Please look at my teeth whitening business

[fryzie]

Which of these 2 designs looks better for me teeth whitening business?

Change of story..Ive been working on another design

Could you let me know which one you think is better?

This is what i have atm
http://www.whitersmile.com.au
but im not a fan of all the flash

and this is what ive been working on

http://www.whitersmile.com.au/newdesign/index2.html

Anyways any reviews or suggestions? thanks heaps. :sold:

 

[Aussie Swan]

If your product is to whiten teeth then I would have a large photograph (really large) of a pretty woman with gleaming teeth as the dominant image of the home page. A picture is worth a thousand words for a product like this.
The Nav bar is very plain too.

 

[katya]

I think you should have more smiles and fewer products on the home page (I'm talking about the new design version)

Show them the results they can have and get them interested in the product, and only then actually show the product.

Katya

 

[itme]

i like the first design better but fell that on both of then the writing looks out of place it needs to be bolder to catch your eye and make you want to read it. a picture of a women with big white teeth would be a great idea as this is the purpose of the site.

 

[mercy]

I like the first one. Even though it look simple, it looks more clean and professional than the second one.

 

[fryzie]

thanks for the suggestions
ive actually decided to keep both pages
but for the new one im going to advertise differently
http://www.whitersmile.com.au/newdesign/index.html - some changes