New Site: Xplosive Innovations

[Tzar]

hey sup

i am new here, plz review my page
advices and critizism is welcomed

enter flash, that is where the goods r at

it's not 100% complete yet i know i am working on it, feedback on my progress is good

http://xinnovations.tk (redir, has a pop up =( )

http://members.x2concepts.com/xinno

thanks

Kevin C.

 

[igaven]

Don’t really know where you are going here. I understand that you are working with the site now but it looks to be a personal site and a business site rolled into one. I believe you would be better off focusing on one or the other. Web counters on a business site are not a good idea and using a free host also is not a good idea. You are trying to convey to your potential customers you are a professional and will take care of them, but using a free host it looks like you are a kid and not very serious about your business. (Not that being a kid is a bad thing)

I would recommend using spell and grammar checking and proof read your copy. One last thing I would dump the Google ads with the traffic you are getting you will not make much money and the ads don’t fit into your site at all.

Put some work into this and you will get to where you want to go!

 

[TWM]

Dont use a .tk domain. It shows how unprofessional of a company it is. I am sure everyone can afford 8.88 per year for a domain registration. And spell checking might be good also. Other than that, your skills are good. Keep at it!

 

[kaliboy2g]

And if you do use the .tk name. At least disable the damn pop-up