My First Template

[OK]

Well I finally made my first (half decent) template. I just want some criticism on what I can do better and what I should change.

Preview : http://www.myspaceaction.com/templates/template.PNG
Download : http://www.myspaceaction.com/templates/template1.psd

Nothing is sliced because I was just too lazy.

Special thanks to smub for helping me with my questions

 

[blazedot]

not bad

 

[sbongo]

the idea's pretty good but i think its a little bright.

 

[firestorm]

Nice design, the colors could use some work. Good for 1st design though.

 

[smub]

thank you very much betrollwin yes ... it is a good design for your first time ... you'll improve

 

[com24]

to much green

 

[nomis135]

i find its not bad at all for a first time.

Keep up the good work mate

 

[Mels]

It's a bit bright in green but for a first template thats not bad at all. Much better than my first!
-Melinda

 

[Rive]

Nice design, but you should avoid excessive use of shouting colors. They hurt the eyes...




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[Mayur]

Not bad for first template. Better than my first template :P

 

[allabout42]

Not bad, a little too bright though... Keep up the good work!

 

[cocaine]

good work
but the decreasing little brightness will make it more cool

 

[LeetPCUser]

Way too bright, basic, and not a lot of images. Nice for a first try. Keep it up.

 

[Epic]

Other than the fact that it hurts my eyes pretty bad...I like it