A few amendments to my sales pitch letter from a few pages back, which may help increase the response rate:
* Shorten the signature a bit, to something along these lines:
John Smith
Software Developer, ITMagic Enterprises
http://www.itmagic.com
Tel: XXX.XXX.XXXX
* No need for the preamble in parentheses, unless you're e-mailing a large corporation.
* If you've Sedo-parked the domain you're pitching, make sure you set your domain's asking price greater than or equal to the price you're proposing to your end-user. Otherwise, the end-user may suspect you're ripping them off and mysteriously stop responding to e-mails.
I've gotten a very healthy 15-20% "I'm interested -- what's your price?" response rate this week using my original sales later with these modifications and have converted 5 sales over the last 4 days. Small end-user sales ($200-$600) are always in season, even during times of economic distress.
My latest finding has been that, quite surprisingly, individuals/families are generally willing to pay almost as much for domain names (and sometimes more) than small businesses. Who knew?