Help! Going insane!

[RichardAFCB]

http://www.nowaysylent.co.uk/richmedia2/index2.html

Had my eyes fixed on this for two hours trying to figure out what the layout is missing but can't put my finger on it.

Any ideas?

Cheers,

Richard

 

[alegend]

maybe a nice background, instead of plain white?

 

[WuLabsWuTecH]

you do need a nicer background... I'd suggest some fluffy sky blue to match the clouds. maybe use the clouds filter in photoshop? also more color in the main box

 

[vip-ip]

Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally pale blue background would be good. No clouds.

 

[WuLabsWuTecH]

not puffy white clouds, but i was thinking of the clous filter on photosho so it wouldn't be just bland pale blue...

 

[alegend]

I wouldn't use the clouds, the pale blue sounds good though.

 

[Virgil]

Agree with pale blue OR a slightly darker background (#DBDBDB).

 

[CrazyTech]

Indeed. Some kind of super pale blue around the background there would do wonders to focus you in on the actual content. My initial impression is that my eyes tend to wander around with all that white space.

 

[zaros64]

Nope it looks very good to me..

 

[Rowan W]

http://www.estorm.com.au/gallery/pics/fontsize.gif - Firefox

http://old.alistapart.com/stories/fear4/index.html

Anyway, the clouds look good.

 

[seank1]

nice minimalist design

 

[webdome]

I think, just to prove the name you need flash design.

 

[RaisinKane]

Suggestions:

1. I would like to see a six dot cluster (seen on main page) colored white in the red box above rich.

2. I would put a free standing background box behind the content (not touching the red strip or the news text). Some have recommended a very pale blue and I think this will work, but I would like to see that color added somewhere eles in the design to tie it together (maybe some accent strips)

3. Lose the clouds...a simple red strip will help close the design without drawing too much attention. (thin white strip inside of the thicker red strip might look nice)

 

[RichardAFCB]

I've considered all of your suggestions and...

http://www.nowaysylent.co.uk/richmedia2/index4.html

Thanks for all the help! Can finally say I'm happy with it.

Cheers,

Richard

 

[painperdu]

You need more images of that blonde haired babe http://www.nowaysylent.co.uk/richmedia2/images/topimages1.jpg

 

[homebuyer]

Editing

No one likes to read a dissertation and hear limitations on intro. Try:


Welcome to richmedia, an experienced professional web design company powered by their own experts in HTML, PHP, MySQL and CSS.

Richmedia provides winning designs for cost-conscious clients who need either a little Internet presence, or to reach everyone under the sun.

So, whether you need a small contact portal in Bournemouth, UK, or an online brochure in Beijing, China, richmedia has the solutions.

Rich
CEO, Rich-Media

 

[cablejobs]

The page looks clean but where dose it end? It looks like the page gets started and then nothing. The page needs a finish. like who created the site copy right info and that kind of wasted space to let you know there is no more below. but other than that it is :kickass:

 

[kw31]

You need more images of that blonde haired babe http://www.nowaysylent.co.uk/richmedia2/images/topimages1.jpg

Straight to the point!