My favorite submission so far, the only one that comes close to looking professional and elegant. I like the hidden commas, and the way the t and i sort of feel like they're embracing.
I would love to see some font alternatives, as well as what it might look like with a lowercase f.
Not sure about the little fire thing replacing the dots over the i, that almost universally makes people think of Tinder now. Let's stick to the quotes/commas. I like the lowercase f!
Can I also see another font option? Similar weight, but perhaps something a little more rounded?
Definitely a top contender - I like the font, I like the flow, the O is cute, but maybe a little too cute. If this were for a children's story site, I would say yeah this is it - but it's not, and a little man reaching for the stars is a little cheesy...
Now that just feels like you're trying to fit a square peg in a round hole. Sorry, the idea of the comma is nice, but the n is so much fatter than the rest of the font, it just doesn't look professional...