asiafoodsafety.com

[nantech1]

Hi NP'ers:
I designed a Whypark site focusing on pet food safety. Very few hits. Your constructive criticism is welcome. I can take it. Please take a look at http://www.asiafoodsafety.com. Let me know what you think.
Thanks.

 

[Mike]

Your DN Name doesn't have much to do with the content you're displaying....unless i'm totally missing the connection between the two.
The images need some cleaning up and be a bit less pixelated.
Proof read your content, there are a few errors here and there.

The length of the content is overbearing, loosen it up a bit and try to find out whether you can place images into your content. It would make the whole thing a lot easier on the eyes.

Other than that, for a parking page, that's a pretty good effort!

IB

 

[nantech1]

Yes Mike when I was new in domaining I regged the domain, then determined that pet food safety had a better KEI than human food safety, so I wrote about the former. Thanks for the suggestions.

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