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Simon Taylor

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Hi all,
Made my first landing page, for NYResort.com
Please let me know any thoughts I know its basic, should I throw some ads on it too? or will that cheapen the look?
Regards
Simon
 
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Hello,

The text in the header is not readable due to the background Image.
[For Sale] [Home, About Us, Contact Us]

It could be more simple with only having one link of "Contact Seller" / "Buy Domain". This will give a better image/reputation. (My opinion)
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You could put out (in BIG) your mail ID for display rather than have it as a link.

Regards,
Dinesh
 
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get rid of that 'hosting pop-up ad'

don;t like the bkgd, doesn't look like ny to me and it's too busy

imo
 
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In addition to the unrelated hosting ad and contrast issues mentioned above, there are alignment issues with the content area ("Marketability", and "Increase Sales" sections). Images are offset their container inconsistently, and the headline hierarchy is lost visually. Try to distinguish them more strongly with various font sizes and treatments.

Good luck!
 
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Agree to get rid of the popup, also the palm trees images takes too long to load, could use some sort of minification
 
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Menu items like Home, About us, Contact us are not at all readable, also put some quality contents and then display some ads, it might get you some $$

Best of luck with the domain..
 
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why not develop it into a real site?
btw the domain is great.
 
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you have a free hosting advertising pop-up there.
 
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