Site Critique

[Tjobbe]

Please rip my site (NOW:design) to shreds or praise it to your hearts content, but please, leave no stone unturned!!

Thanks..

Tjobbe


http://www.now-design.co.uk/

 

[bobbi]

Very nice site Tjobbe, I'm sure you already know this, but two of the buttons do not work, (services and links). Nice choice of colors as well.

 

[DarkDevil]

all i can suggest is get the transparent WC3: HTML button, like the css one.

 

[Xyion]

well, to be honest i think its a bit 'simple', it has the wrong collors and when you go to another page, the menu gets thinner! also the size of the top-text changes, but every text you used is to big...

ok than where the negative aspects

 

[insomnia]

Ok. so like you want a rip. I got you're new a--hole right here.

For startes wwww.bolt.com found that orange and blue are ugly together. they do not match. They do not compliment they do not like eachother. so why pair them? Ok color choice all wrong.

Now the fonts. Too big too ugly. try something a lil more readable. Sans and serif, there is a difference and newspapers know this. follow their example(not magazines, newspaper).

Skip the w3 check. That should go somewhere at the bottom and be really small. Really really small.

"your one shop stop for all your web presences" or whatever should be fitted to one line.

Keep your logo on all the pages not just one. It looks unprofessional to have pages change logo or names near logos. perhaps maybe NOW:design and then smaller over that have links or something when they click to links.

The blue is still bothering me.

Now Design sticks out to much and is getting annoying as I surf more.

So is the text size.

Ok so like good job sport. Keep trying. Overal I don't like it. Oh I almost forgot to check your source.. one sec...




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very good source job. I can tell you didn't use notepad though. So... Good job...I appologize if I was harsh but some things need to be said. and you asked for it.

 

[TWM]

The text next to the logo : Now: design is different sizes than each other, and look bad. Somehow, you need to incoporate the now design stuf into your logo, and not just have it plain text. Your one stop shop for an effective web presence should be all one line. It might be just me, but i think it is way too small. I prefer bigger things than that. There is way too much dead space ya know. too much blue... and BTW blue and orange match, but not in the quantities that you have them in. Try some different shades or something. On the about us page, you say where it is located and who runs it, but nothing about the company ( the main thing for the about us page). On the links page, i think that the text logo thing is smaller than all the other logos. Also your links menu bar thing changes sizes on everypage. Some pages it is small, some it is bigger. On the contact us page, you might consider putting the snail mail stuff under the links, and move the email form up to the top where the snail mail is currently located. I think the only thing tht saved you is the css, but then again, i dont like the colors so o well.

sry for being VERY outspoken, but you DID ask for it LOL

 

[insomnia]

lol. I didn't know orange and blue matched. Blue has got to outweigh the orange then right? I never did like blue with lighter colors except greys and whites. So maybe it's a personal profrence. I retract the statement that blue and orange don't match and go with the latter of blue and orange in the wrong amounts.

 

[Tjobbe]

Thanks all those who replied, seriously, thanks!

I've got some work to do to my ite, methinks!

Tjobbe