Redesign once again

[turnkey]

Ok we hope we are done with the redesign of our index page. We have started a new business strategy, besides the typical turnkey business that everyone sells (dotcombuilder & prozilla), we are trying to build a support membership network to help these owners as well as the average internet business owner.

We have collected a nice network of membership sites that we can resell access to to help support these clients.

So we have to create a index page that would explain the different services we offer.

We also have added links to our adsense articles and directory so that we would attract search engines with content as well.

New index http://www.myturnkeybusiness.com/
Old index http://www.myturnkeybusiness.com/index2.html

Is the New one to busy?
Are we trying to be too many things to to many clients?

Thanks again guys.

 

[Mike_Wiseman]

I like the old one better, and the new one does seem a bit complex like you dont know where to start

 

[NPQueen]

I like the look of the original, it looks more professional. If you are trying to make a change to the page, I would suggest trying to incorporate the new information you have from the new index page into the old one.

Good luck!

 

[turnkey]

Hmmm yeah thats what we where thinking, hmmm

Maybe keep the new lay out, because of linking, and just cut the information on it and take the info from the 1 sales page and create 2 different sales info pages to explain the different services we offer.

Hmmmm

 

[Albino]

i prefer the new one a LOT more

take of the annoying music, add links down the site in stead of the pointless image, and voila!

 

[lilgee]

nice design. I like it. Did you create the design yourself?

 

[turnkey]

Yeah Most of it, the menu links along the top and background where designed for us.

I took some of your advice guys, I simply divided the information on different pages and linked to each from the index. Hopefully not confusing my clients and allowing them to chose which service they need and want.