Rate my site - please, pretty please

[willawonga1]

Please can you rate my site. I can take good and bad comments.

The site is PPE.ORG - EVERYBODY NEEDS PROTECTION

I would be most gratefull.

Thank you domainers.

 

[DubDubDubDot]

The site is terrible.

The information on the index page reads like it was written for a child (printing that a beekeeping hat is a form of protective headgear, etc...). I don't see any value in this text for an adult working in an industry that requires protective equipment. They are already going to know this very basic material.

The text on "Employees Health and Safety Responsibilities" is taken from a UK government site. This should be clearly noted since you have a global audience.

I'm sure this is just a mock site and not for actual use, but if it was you would want to showcase the "Training" section. That is the money page. You don't want these services buried in the last two paragraphs of a page that itself is buried. You want the training services to make up the index page almost in it's entirety.

 

[willawonga1]

The site is terrible.

The information on the index page reads like it was written for a child (printing that a beekeeping hat is a form of protective headgear, etc...). I don't see any value in this text for an adult working in an industry that requires protective equipment. They are already going to know this very basic material.

The text on "Employees Health and Safety Responsibilities" is taken from a UK government site. This should be clearly noted since you have a global audience.

I'm sure this is just a mock site and not for actual use, but if it was you would want to showcase the "Training" section. That is the money page. You don't want these services buried in the last two paragraphs of a page that itself is buried. You want the training services to make up the index page almost in it's entirety.

Thanks for the advice. I have only set it up as an information in the first instance to attempt to get the page noticed by Google. I dont really know what I am doing which is why am here asking for advice. All the pages are taken from other sites, the first page (bee keeper) is taken from Wikipedia and copied over.

The site is for sale (the domain name ppe.org is where the value is) I just wanted a site that at least gave someone some info rather than land at a holding page.