Please review my site

[goldsgym]

http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/club

The site is not completely done yet. There are various links which need to be completed. Anyways, my question is how much should i charge the owner of the 3 gyms - I have not come up with a price yet for him. Also, do you like t
he design and layout - anythign that should be changed? (I know there is no style sheet....) Thanks in advance for your comments. (my main concern is the price to charge)

 

[Anthony]

I think you have a great start there and may be able to charge hundreds for the site, but you need to really add a professional touch to it.

Check out http://www.ballyfitness.com/ to see what I mean.

 

[identity_00]

why not just make one like goldsgym?

 

[Anthony]

Originally posted by identity_00
why not just make one like goldsgym?

Have you seen GoldsGym.com? Not the best designed website I've seen for a gym. Anyway, this seems to be a design for separate franchises of Golds Gym.

 

[goldsgym]

I have updated my site. Change the background color. Font faces. Added some more information. Updated the gymfront images. added CSS for links and changed link sizes.

 

[TWM]

I would agree with Anthony, it definatly needs to be more professional. I think yellow can sometimes be a professional color, but not in the quantity that you have it in. Try adding another color to balance it out. I think that will do the trick.

 

[goldsgym]

I have been messing around with the site. And here is the new design I have. Let me know if you like it.


http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/test

 

[painperdu]

It's fast and no needless flash -I like it.

Use less yellow and darken the foreground box a bit.

 

[viciouscircle]

i agree, you need to use less yellow. maybe add a blue to offset some of the yellow. other than that, its rather nice.

 

[goldsgym]

I think the site layout is done for sure now. What do you guys think? Also, how much should i charge the owner for this site?? When the site is complete it will be 20+ pages.

FINAL LAYOUT:
http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/club.html

 

[Anthony]

I like the improvements you've made, but I would try to blend the three location photos better. The white space between them doesn't work so well.

What other pages will be developed for this site?

 

[goldsgym]

Originally posted by Anthony
I like the improvements you've made, but I would try to blend the three location photos better. The white space between them doesn't work so well.

What other pages will be developed for this site?

There will be 3 more pages for a staff section for each gym. There will be 3 more pages for a tour section for each gym. There will be 3 pages for aerobic schedules for each gym. As well as a club hours page, daycare hours page, employment page, and promotion page. All together teh website will be about 18-20 pages.