Need critique please

[KidVeeDublu]

hey
this is my second post ...[more details on my first one in the welcome center]
since i am teaching myself i dont have any professional feedback or direction...i am starting with a marketing handicapped company.. and i could use feedback on a corporate identity i am producing...i have better work i have done since and im aware of alot of changes i need to make but please critique my logo and web design .....thanks
www.gshocks.com

 

[adam_uk]

not very 56k safe is it

get rid of the intro page (time waster)

apart from that looks ok

 

[KidVeeDublu]

thanks
already done!

 

[blouis]

8.43 @ 173 mph - thats one fast beetle

nice site i like it, not 56k friendly though......hmmmm i need some suspension work on my car..... doubt yours would even work on mine

 

[KidVeeDublu]

yeah man thats Ron Lummus- he's the quickest and fastest vw in north america
also midwest and western idrc champion last season-we build all of his race shocks
but thanks- i gotta shrink down some images - i think my bigger problem is the configuration of folders, im working on cleaning it up. you gotta make mistakes to learn from them right?

 

[coolblue]

I think the site needs a forum - invisionfree.com do a nice free hosted board that only takes a few mins to get online

 

[InteractAsia]

looks good and yeah 8.43 @ 173 mph :lala:

 

[blouis]

exactly...ya have shocks to fit a 3000gt?

 

[KidVeeDublu]

blouis ...shoot me an email on what your looking for and i'll see what i can do for ya :D

 

[iczed]

I like the friendly, elegant color choice of yours.

Why not do the gif in flash? Would the file size not be a large difference?

I think the numerous pictures you have placed on the right side of the page and below are all right, but could have better placement. Think it would look nice if you, perhaps, made some sort of semi-circle with the pictures, embedding them in cirles with a background that gradually goes from the deep yellowish color to white, as it approaches the bottom-left side where the white edge lies...or something?

Sorry, I get carried away with ideas and what not, I understand if I have complicated you. It might even look like crap I don't know.

Good work so far though. Good luck.

 

[KidVeeDublu]

Well i used a gif for two reasons...1.)I am not exacltly comfortable with my flash skills yet and 2.)The target audience is primarily drag racers and such which are not exactly into computers like us so i can assume that there will be a large portion that will not have a flash player and therefore not be able to view the vid [however that may just be an excuse reverting back to (1.)]
I think i am gonna play around with some of your ideas especially because alot of the images are really place holders right now. thanks for the advice!

 

[Anthony]

Interesting, but too many gshocks!