.mobi MAG White Paper Comment

[meegwell]

For those that have read or started to read the MAG white paper...anyone notice the sub-par writing? I really hate to say this, and I stopped from posting this message several times...a professional paper such as this should have been written better. I say this with concern since obviously I am a .mobi supporter. For the record I am only on page 10 and it is sometimes difficult to read w/ all the poor writing. For educated professionals in the business world, this is tough to read (so far).