very dominant backdrop, take the backdrop with a little more low key and don't overshadow the main message. which gets to say, what is the main message?
Present your content with a bit more explanation, find your target group and cater to them. Use a more "glamorous" shot of the magazine. the one you have looks wore out and handed down.
the idea itself, from what i gather, is not bad, just needs to really be presented. you're on the right track,...just sit back and think about who you're catering to and what you think they'd expect to see...then help them make a decision by presenting to their needs.