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[killerid]

Ohh nothing much thanks for coming and reading this so now can u review this site?? :

UNDERME

+ve + -ve reviews will help. :sold:

 

[alegend]

The flash header on the intro page needs to be worked on a little more, maybe use a different text style?

You REALLY need to work on the main page though

 

[music_man]

Hi

I like the immediacy of your site, however do you need both animations on your front page?

The background picture seems abit too dominant and makes the text a little harder to read, if you could fade it, it might help. I really like the animations between pages, fast and effective.

Why in your source code is

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repeated all the time?

You have no META description and the title of your page does not change when you visit another page. Your main page is not valid XHTML as stated in your doctype: http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://sbclan.ca/main.html.

Your liknk colours are inconsistant to the text - i.e. you have links set as red and italicised and you have text which is similarly formatted but not linked. Perhaps to distinguish links you could add an underline or some sort.

Your footer text overflows the box it is contained in.

 

[killerid]

The flash header on the intro page needs to be worked on a little more, maybe use a different text style?

You REALLY need to work on the main page though

Hmm can u provide some clues like what needs to be changed on the main.html page and the index.html page ? and is the animation on intro page ok ?

Oh and music_man What u mean by the code been repeated ? they are set of rules and each is different not the same. but since this is flash template i cannot seem to find option to underline the text links so anyone with flash knowledge can tell me how to underline text and yaa the footer box overflows a bit will fix the text size or will fix that image box . And the sound of the links are good or way too loud and are they appropriate?and i dont know why the code is not proper i made the main page using dreamweaver so it created whetever it should have itself.

 

[StudioWorks]

Just visited your site in my intent to write a review. Waiting about 3 minutes and it still wasn't loaded so I gave up. but i can tell you this : it's too dark.

All the best,

- SW

 

[unknowngiver]

the main page is fine buh ur site needs work
1. CHange the template..and if not that then atleast the background image
2. CENTER IT

 

[MichaelV.]

centering would be good.

i agree that there is just too much going on... id recommend getting rid of the bottom animation and using the top animation as your attention-getter

 

[bentong]

center it..dont use blue and red on black background, they are same solid color

 

[killerid]

I have tried many times to center them using dreamweaver and all the time it fails so is there any other tool i can use to edit that page to center those things? So bentong which colors would u suggest cause its over 30 frames and will be painful to edit the colors of each figures so if possible can u tell the colors that might look good?
And mvannote i am thinking of keeping the animation but i wanted it on the flash page but dont know how to add it into flash yet so kept it on the main intro page . Yaa its kinda too much going on main page i think .

And unknowngiver
u mean the background image on the main.html page right ? and should i choose a darker image or white background with black text ?

Thanks

 

[music_man]

Hi

Before

<object classid="clsid:d27cdb6e-ae6d-11cf-96b8-444553540000" codebase="http://fpdownload.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab#version=6,0,0,0" width="800" height="880" id="main" align="middle">

try either a

<center>(content)</center>

or

<div style="text-align:center; align=center;">(content)</div>

I am not sure if that will work well because of your design layout but another thing you could try is adding at the top of the page under your closing head tag is

<style type="text/css">body {text-align:center;}</style>

You could try that out.

 

[Virtua]

Sorry but I didn't like the layout

-ve !

Thanks
Virtua

 

[killerid]

Sorry but I didn't like the layout

-ve !

Thanks
Virtua

OK but i think ur account is suspended so i wonder how u managed to post . Anyways reason would be appreciated if and when ur account gets reopened.