Feedback needed on new flash work...

[rosem]

Hey everyone, been a while since I posted in these parts. A few moths ago I was posting this site - http://www.rosem.com/work/ferris - and asking for a few comments.

Well I'm starting a new flash project for school. It's going to be about moths (I don't really have a choice in the matter). So far I have this - http://www.rosem.com/work/random/mothWebsite - I would call it about 5% done

What I'm looking for is input on the design, animations, etc... what you like and what you don't like. Also, when the page loads - is my frame displayed correctly?

 

[wasistdas]

Well, there is nothing special, really

 

[infinitomagazine]

i dont like white background color, animation is good, by the way ur frame looks too big for my screeen resolution.

i saw ur first work, very good,cogratulation

keep working

 

[Albino]

first one is really nice, well done

second one, took aaaages to load, n then it stopped on a woodland scene. ill try again later though, may ave just been me.

 

[Xyzer]

I like them both, i think that the first one is especially good though.

 

[LeetPCUser]

I like it but the picture frame is not lining up correctly. Could you, by any chance, give me flash tuts?

 

[angele803]

ooo, moths.....fun :hehe:
Seriously though, I really like it. It looks very nice. It did take a long time to load though. Also, the picture frame looks very good, but it doesnt fit in my window. There is a good inch to an inch and a half of extra white space at the top of the screen. I think if you can find a way to get rid of that, the frame will fit.
Other than that, great job!

 

[Andromeda]

hmm.. but the link isn't loading or...?

 

[Maverick]

I've looked at your second link and it took an awefully long time to load though once it did it was nice, not spectacular, but nice. You definately need to change the page background though, the white just ain't cutting it.

Good luck with any revisions you make.