Feedback Appreciated

[noswad]

Hi.

I'd appreicate some feedback on my index pages.

I can't decide between this one or this one.

P.S. Please excuse some of the dodgy images.

Thanks for reading :hehe:

 

[leviathon]

I would personally definitely pick the 2nd one over the 1st one.

For one the pictures are more attractive than the first one, especially the tooltip on the steps (in red). But I noticed there were more phones in the first page, so maybe you can move those pictures to your second page (which I favor :D) and you can make an improvement

Good luck :yell:

 

[LeetPCUser]

I like the first design better but some things like the logo really need some work. However for layout I am sold on the first.

 

[fmauniverse]

Reply

Hi. I would pick the second one, because the first one has too many pictures and the second one is much more clearer than the first one. The template looks quite basic to me. You might want to colour the white background within the template. The logo and other colours and borders look all nice.

Hope this helps,

Regards.

 

[-TV-]

i pick the second , small and not too much picture , plus boots love small pages with good continent <-- wich is missing lil bit to be indexed good ,

about the logo yes i agree you need design a nice logo if you can't there is other members would like to do a contest to design logo for you with good price in the design seccion , one more thing SEO is lil bit missing need keywords and description of your website in eatch page to help index your site in Search engins .

Colors are perfect i just love them , good luck with your website

Tv

 

[noswad]

Thanks v much guys.

I have just added a picture to the header of the second page which already makes it look less plain.

I have taken note over the logo and SEO and will get on it tomorrow.

Thanks again

P.S. More comments welcome on the good, bad and ugly.

 

[daughterofeve]

the 2nd design is better, and more eye-catching... but it takes much longer to load!
The first design is less interesting at the top, but I do like the thumnails of all the cellphones down below.
Niether one looks so good with the little "Welcome" on the blue bar near the top. Consider eliminating that, or changing the text completely, to some catchy phrase that sums up the purpose of the website.

 

[noswad]

Thanks daughterofeve.

Im also not keen on the welcome message and will look to change it soon.

:kickass:

 

[ReBoot]

http://www.freegadgets.co.uk/mobiles/test.php I think is much more better. The navigation is much clearer and much more faster loading. Most people also wants interactiveness in the site which is present.

 

[monaco]

Second one is definitely better...explains the program better. Especially important given how leary most ppl are about these offer-referral programs...