How can I improve this landing page?

This is nicer than most I’ve seen. If you’re going for simple and clear, this does everything you need it to.

What I might improve on: I think you could play with some more modern fonts for headlines, I would look at Frank, Visby CF or the heavier weights of Poppins.

I like the idea of a countdown, seems to work magic for conversions in other online shopping but I wonder how well it would do with domains. But hey, psychology is psychology so it might work.

Don’t love the icons on the bottom, they feel somewhat bulky and nondescript to me. A great source of icons you probably already know of is Noun Project, you can probably find some options there.

Good work!

Overall it looks nice. My thoughts on the design and content:

* The design is nice and clean. Pretty straightforward
* I'm don't like the word "congratulations". Who are you congratulating? The visitor? Why?
* What happens when the countdown expires?
* Are the domain characterstics (legth, remembarility etc) per domain or are they generic?
* I'd recommend against the 24 hour claim as that's quite aggressive and pretty hard to meet in almost all transactions not being handled by the registrar themselves.

Don't take the feedback negatively please. I like the design and just offering my thoughts.

I totally agree with anantj. Congratulations word is nonsense and it may take the eye of the visitor and may cause a visitor to think its a spammy ad page.

ulasbbtr said:

I totally agree with anantj. Congratulations word is nonsense and it may take the eye of the visitor and may cause a visitor to think its a spammy ad page.

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Do you think a better wording would be something like "Good news!" ?

Design is great. Tune the message as you go.