How's my drawing?

[will7]

Right, I've decided to try and get into drawing on the computer. Here is my first attempt at drawing a cartoon character from scratch:

I'm just looking to get feedback from you guys about it. Please bear in mind this is my first try, ever at drawing cartoons, so keep that in your head when you give me your opinions!

Thanks,

Will.

 

[paaaaaaaaaa]

yep nice work Will. More you practice the better you get. Don't be scared of trying new things, such as shading shadows on the face caused by the nose etc. Also with the shading technique you dont have to have black lines everywhere.