Please help me improve this store...

[Richieboy67]

I have not put much time into this yet but this summer I plan on redoing the whole thing.....

I am looking for ideas etc .....

http://www.anonlinemall.com


I know right now it is not much to look at but I am looking for ideas on what would make it better....... telling me how bad it looks now will not help....


Thanks

 

[fmauniverse]

Site review

Hi. First of all, the template looks good, just needs a bit editing. You could add more colours where there is white and you need to fix the banner as the text under US section is over the border. Second, the shop script looks good. Well done on that.

Overall Rating: 8/10

Need to work on the layout a bit.

Good luck with your site!

If you like my review and comments, you can add rep for me.

Regards.

 

[Richieboy67]

Thanks... Rep added.. I appreciate it..

 

[antman]

Site: An Online MallOnline

Praise
[^] Great variety
[^] Caterogised well
[^] Detailed reviews
[^] Images for items well done
[^] Decent pricing

Things to Fix
[!] Needs a banner
[!] Too many ads! If you want ads, don't have too many of them
[!] Needs a logo and/or favicon
[!] Needs a "Recommended" or "Most Purchased" page
[!] 'Find Out More Info' for certain pages don't work
[!] Grammar errors such as "If your from the UK please" (Should be you're)
[!] http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9342/aom9fo.jpg < The red rectangles indicate areas where the page design needs to be fixed. The arrow on the right indicates that there should either be an ad placed there, or the text box covering that area too.

It's a new concept of online shopping, and there are some great parts completed. Hopefully my feedback will aid your site in becoming more popular. Good luck

Review by antman. All sites are accessed on Mozilla Firefox with a screen resolution of 1280x1024. If you have found my review helpful, please feel free to donate NP$ or add reputation. Thanks.

 

[kindigo]

Your top banner exceeds the black border, you can either make your banner smaller or make your black border bigger.

Your top banner is too plain, only texts and no images.

Too much ads, 2 or 3 is enough

 

[Richieboy67]

Thank you all so much. I knew there was a reason why I am always here...lol

I will follow this advice..... all of it is very good.

Thanks again...

 

[Richieboy67]

I have made a few changes.... I would love to hear how I did...

Thanks..



http://www.anonlinemall.com/