Templates are strictly for beginners because they've yet to learn the true value behind a domain name and how it actually benefits an end user, and if they did know then they wouldn't be using a template.
Once you actually know the true value of your domain and you start acquiring domains that have *obvious* value, you won't need a template because the email will be free-flowing, you will both know it's a good name, you will both know why they should own it, and you can begin approaching on a more natural level where you'll find every email you send for one domain is different from the other. That's when you've got domains worth selling, that's when you can call yourself a "domainer".
Telling is not selling. Telling an end user that your domain is available for sale is extremely passive and spammy. *Explaining* to them how you acquired a domain, personally used this domain, how it benefited you and how it's becoming available and what they need to do to own it is what you call selling.
Here's a few tips:
BIG NO-NO I spotted in this 'template' and in other 'templates' I've seen.
Never...ever... APOLOGIZE at the end of your initial email for any reason.
"If you believe that this mail was not relevant or if you are not interested ,please reply back with Not Interested or Unsubscribe, I shall refrain from troubling you again"
^ What is that?
That is no way to close a sale. You are basically putting the idea in their head that you weren't even worthy enough contact them to begin with. Most business people who aren't looking to rip you off want to do business with a confident person. If you're not a confident person you should at least be confident in the domain you are selling, if you are not confident in the domain you are selling, don't spam people.
I receive not interested responses like "Thank you for the offer, Tom. However..."
If my first email would've closed with: "I shall refrain from troubling you again" they would've responded "F* off Tom!"
Rather, end your emails like this:
"I appreciate your time and attention to this email and I look forward to hearing from you."
Best Regards,
Full name,
domainname.com Owner
phone-number"
Another tip: the only benefits I myself personally explain in emails is give numbers. Numbers involving the amount of times the keyword(s) is searched, the amount of money advertisers are paying to showcase themselves under the exact keywords for the domain I'm selling and how many other similar domains have been already taken by their competitors. That's it. Any more than that is 'fluff' and fluff bores people and turns them off, they'll quickly click delete or report as spam.
I'll maybe post some more in a bit...