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They're all:
too simple
too plain
too little pictures.
They're based from free templates, which sort of kills your whole idea. Like the 3rd one. It is a free template on the internet, which means it wouldn't be exactly fit for your purpose. And you need much much more pictures....
Still I like some of the ideas, but you can put a lot more work into your sites and improve them greatly.
Good luck
too simple
too plain
too little pictures.
They're based from free templates, which sort of kills your whole idea. Like the 3rd one. It is a free template on the internet, which means it wouldn't be exactly fit for your purpose. And you need much much more pictures....
Still I like some of the ideas, but you can put a lot more work into your sites and improve them greatly.
Good luck
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Thanks...dig your icon...
I think all three look quite professional actually, especially the first one and it's colour scheme. (Although I dont agree with the SEO text at the bottom, you really shouldn't do that.)
The last is the worst of them because it seems to have very little to it, if you understand me.
The last is the worst of them because it seems to have very little to it, if you understand me.
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Thanks for the accolade...I have so many sites to develop that I am just kindof slapping them up and fixing them as I go...gotta get them indexed.
Why shouldn't I have the text on the bottom? It is all relevent terms to the page...no hidden keywords that are offensive...
Why shouldn't I have the text on the bottom? It is all relevent terms to the page...no hidden keywords that are offensive...
Moving Concierge-The purple is a little overwhelming and the red on the page clashes with everything else. The logo imagine you are using looks a little "cheap" compaired to the other imagines ont he site. Nice concept!
Werehunter-It didnt' load for me I tried three times. Sorry
Voip-links-This one didn't load either, server down maybe?
Werehunter-It didnt' load for me I tried three times. Sorry
Voip-links-This one didn't load either, server down maybe?
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Thanks for the comments. I just tried the red to see what it looked like. I don't like the standard blue and the purple is just bold text.
I get a lot of positive feedback on the purple branding on media print, so I have to keep it throughout. I kindof like it actually...and obviously.
I noticed that the two other sites weren't loading for some of the day. I was pretty busy on the servers, that could be why. Thanks for trying and for the comments...again.
I get a lot of positive feedback on the purple branding on media print, so I have to keep it throughout. I kindof like it actually...and obviously.
I noticed that the two other sites weren't loading for some of the day. I was pretty busy on the servers, that could be why. Thanks for trying and for the comments...again.
I thought I would try again...
WereHunter-I think this one looks nice, I like the background. There is a large blank gap in the middle of the main page. Have you considered having a couple of different pages for this site instead of everything on the main page?
Voip-Links-I agree with some of the others above. I think this one looks the best of the three.
Best of luck with these projects!
WereHunter-I think this one looks nice, I like the background. There is a large blank gap in the middle of the main page. Have you considered having a couple of different pages for this site instead of everything on the main page?
Voip-Links-I agree with some of the others above. I think this one looks the best of the three.
Best of luck with these projects!
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I actually do plan on breaking up werehunter and werehunters into multiple pages. I got some other advise to add more text about each book on the page before sending off the visitor to my affiliate.
I also took the advise of the red link haters, so if you all can revisit themovingconcierge.com and give some revised insight it would be genuinely appreciated.
Thanks again for all the help...it's a reciprical world...
I also took the advise of the red link haters, so if you all can revisit themovingconcierge.com and give some revised insight it would be genuinely appreciated.
Thanks again for all the help...it's a reciprical world...
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Time for critiques:
The Moving Concierge: First off I would center the site. It looks very odd left aligned. Second off, work the Google ad into the design, maybe a footer. Definately don't have it chilling on the right hand side by itself. I also do not care for the JavaScript menu thingy.
Were Hunter: Not bad except the book alignment at the bottom seems off because the main page is only half the size and the books span 100%. I would say center this put a 1px white solid border on it and contain the books in it. Then it could look nice. I especially like the blue with white rollover on the links.
VOIP: Looks good except it needs to be centered. The links at the bottom are centered on FireFox but are not aligning with the page. Also the Google Ads are overflowing and not lining up. I would also recommend making some pretty pictures or text on the main intro to the site.
If you need help or creative ideas feel free to pm me.
The Moving Concierge: First off I would center the site. It looks very odd left aligned. Second off, work the Google ad into the design, maybe a footer. Definately don't have it chilling on the right hand side by itself. I also do not care for the JavaScript menu thingy.
Were Hunter: Not bad except the book alignment at the bottom seems off because the main page is only half the size and the books span 100%. I would say center this put a 1px white solid border on it and contain the books in it. Then it could look nice. I especially like the blue with white rollover on the links.
VOIP: Looks good except it needs to be centered. The links at the bottom are centered on FireFox but are not aligning with the page. Also the Google Ads are overflowing and not lining up. I would also recommend making some pretty pictures or text on the main intro to the site.
If you need help or creative ideas feel free to pm me.
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I had this big nicely worded thank you written and....BOOM...down went my PC...figures...
Anyway thanks for all the comments and criticisms. I will take them all into consideration and implement what I can. Some of the comments I didn't even know about, like the off center this and that...doesn't show on my PC.
Thanks again. When I become a guru, I'll reciprocate.
Anyway thanks for all the comments and criticisms. I will take them all into consideration and implement what I can. Some of the comments I didn't even know about, like the off center this and that...doesn't show on my PC.
Thanks again. When I become a guru, I'll reciprocate.
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thank you thank you...
I took a lot of the advice given on this board and put it into my site. Could I get a couple of eyes to give a second look? Thanks.
The Moving Concierge
I took a lot of the advice given on this board and put it into my site. Could I get a couple of eyes to give a second look? Thanks.
The Moving Concierge
I like all three of them. The werehunter needs to be broken up into different pages however.
Heres a tip for you. Always check your sites in at least both IE and Firefox as these are the most popular browsers. I usually check mine in IE,Firefox and Opera. Also it's usually a good idea to check them in 800x600 since quite a few people still use it. It's takes a bit of time but it's better then finding out later your site looks like crap in one of them. I'm speaking from experience here :lol:
Heres a tip for you. Always check your sites in at least both IE and Firefox as these are the most popular browsers. I usually check mine in IE,Firefox and Opera. Also it's usually a good idea to check them in 800x600 since quite a few people still use it. It's takes a bit of time but it's better then finding out later your site looks like crap in one of them. I'm speaking from experience here :lol:
The first one looks okay, but the header needs more work. The second one is the least I like, probably because of the dark theme and it hurts my eyes to read from websites with black backgrounds. The third is okay, although the ads sticks out on the right, so the whole body isn't aligned with the header anymore.
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