Please Review My New Store..

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• Feb 17, 2007

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Tried to work in web2.0 or what?

As I see, it is usual trial of SEO-related guy to do something good. Fine architecture but ugly look-and-feel... Do something with that, it kills your eshop.

 

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Richieboy67

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• Feb 17, 2007

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Thanks for the honesty.... I often do have that problem.....

Any ideas for layour improvement or anything?? I was thinking of a backround etc.... I figured the content would be a selling point....

 

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Richie, you can try to use my expirience

You can copy/paste the blocks and general look-and-feel to your estore and it will be the bomb.

http://rank-1.net/4richie/estore.jpg

This is not finished layout, was done for one of my customers and not accepted because of his disappearing(i mean customer ). Can send you PSD, if you need.

 

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Richieboy67

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• Feb 17, 2007

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Hey, Thanks!! That would help a great deal.. I really appreciate that and if you could help with the psd's that would even be better!!


Tell you what-- Please go to www.afreeurl.info and I will give you a free featured link for a year.. I am charging $25 per year right now.. pr4 and expected 6..

Just input your info etc and pm me the link name...

Thanks again for the help.. I need all I can get...lol

Rich

 

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• Feb 17, 2007

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I really like the site, though you could work a bit on the home page the links are too smal and a few links i clicked there were no products associated with it..you should remove them

and also the top link "AnOnlineMall-General Merchandise" Can you make it something like "An Online Mall "

Would give you a 4/10 right now but if you use the psd rank1 gave you easily a 7/10 :D

btw rank1 i added rep! i would also love to have tht psd!

regards

 

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Richieboy67

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• Feb 17, 2007

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Thanks for the feedback.. I appreciate it...

I plan to use some of ranks stuff for sure...

I guess I need to do some kind of a header too?? and check links.. It is hard to keep up with the links though because they change all the time..

Small links too.. What res are you guys viewing in?? I know it looks better with high res and sometimes I design with my pc set high.....

 

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• Feb 17, 2007

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Small links too.. What res are you guys viewing in?? I know it looks better with high res and sometimes I design with my pc set high.....

Click to expand...

1024*768 is most used screen resolution in 2006. Remember, when you working for resolution bigger or lower than using at the moment, you must change the resolution to target. Or you could have some... whew... troubles with the result.

 

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You need:
a logo + banner
present your content differently, you're pushing for copies of bones & 24 right now, since they are obviously the best selling item, all the while you're forgetting the vast content of all the other categories.
feature items, but do it on the side bars use the main/center of the site to show off the different sections that you have.
leave the text links out and switch over to buttons with representative icons of the category.
give users the opportunity to rate and vote for the products they purchased
in the long run, if users wanted to sign up for email alerts to receive notification when their item arrives....?

that's it for the beginning. Currently, you're on a .5 out of 3 possible :tu:

 

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Richieboy67

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• Feb 17, 2007

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Thanks... I guess my work is cut out for me...lol

I will have to post it again after the changes take place... I will take a piece of everyone's advice and use it for sure..

Thanks again!!

If there is more then keep it comin!! lol

 

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Richieboy67

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• Feb 27, 2007

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I was wondering if there is anyone here that could maybe help me achieve some of the things requested here. I plan to do most of it myself but time is tough...

I will trade advertising for work and as I said.. I don't need too much help. Maybe an hour or two at most...

The advertising will be on a pr5, a pr4 and 2 or 3 other sites that are 3 or below...........

Please respond here in this thread..... I am asking for an hour or two from someone that knows what they are doing. I am using freekrai affiliate script..

Thanks

 

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• Feb 27, 2007

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Hi,

layout looks quite standard.. you need good layout.. maybe flash header, logo.. add some graphics.

 

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Richieboy67

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• Feb 27, 2007

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I agree.... I plan to start working this week but I have some other stuff to do first... I am looking for volunteers to help with minor things in exchange for advertising...