Made a completely new redesign on my page - Please tell me what you think

[fryzie]

This was the old site
http://www.whitersmile.com.au

And this is now the new one will be looking
http://www.whitersmile.com.au/NEWWEBSITE07/index.html

Im wondering If I can get some opinions on it, ne changes that needs to be made etc.. I want to get this new page up asap.

I know some pages are still a mess - products & prices (I still got no idea how to design this page), no FAQ page yet and no CONTACT page

But with what I got, please tell me what you think and if you think its an improvement from my old page.

THANKS

 

[shockie]

it looks much much better :tu although your code can be reduced easily (less bandwidth and faster loading times).

 

[jl255]

when the page first loaded, my initial reaction is, "very professional looking!". Looks clean and the white/light blue theme fits in very well with your product.

- front page may be alittle too wordy, and fonts are too small. May want to highlight keypoints and then include a <<read more>> option for interested visitors to go deeper. Sometimes, having too many words may turn visitors off.
- to beautify your site, may want to implement interactive menus that perhaps highlight when mouse-over to give it that additional touch of sophistication
- it is good to have a summary of all products, but should have dedicated page for each package for ppl who want to know more of each package and which is more suitable for them
-comparisons page is a good selling point. May want to enhance it further by highlighting the differences, and to make the page more attractive, etc
- research page should implement in such a way to allow expansion of articles. In that way, u can add more content for SE and to keep your visitors interested.
- include an 'about us' and 'contact us' option as it gives customers higher confidence and also for them to learn abt you to know that they are not buying from some back-alley retailer

Just some simple ideas, hope it helps. Do add to my reputation if it has, so I know how to improve =)

 

[Mike]

I remember looking at your site before. You changed almost everything that the reviewers suggest, the outcome is a very professional looking site that doesn't leave anything to question or wonder about.

Just a few things: The font, although small, works for me. However, there's a LOT of text. I'd consider revising the text, making it shorter and even more to the point. Reading is good, too much reading is a turn off.
Maybe it's just my slowly failing eye sight, but it seems to me that the nav bar is not 100% sharp but a bit fuzzy.
Research section is quite ok, the quick Nav is great, should be emphasized though. There's your "Make Money" button, make this section a bit larger.
Contact is getting a 404 Error - needs to be fixed.

Overall, aside from what the others already pointed out, it seems that everytime you step up here you're greatly improving.
Great job! :tu::tu: 2/3

 

[seven]

my immediate reaction is the second page looks far more professional but you need to take out some of the text and provide that in other pages. there's too much to read to soon, the visitor will explore other linked material if they are interested.

 

[fryzie]

ThaNKS everyone
very cool of yourself

Have made some changes
http://www.whitersmile.com.au/NEWDESIGN07/

Particularly the products/prices page

Still will be working on it