advice Great sales pitch I received from an inquiry I think it's great

[ben pedri]

Great sales pitch I received from an inquiry I think it's great:

Thank you for your offer. I sincerely appreciate it (and your patience) as we work with this buyer. As you may already know the price of this domain is $1,200.00.

I have a great deal of experience negotiating for premium names like this and can tell you it is real work convincing sellers to let go of great names like this. I've seen this seller discount a previous sale by 15-20%, but sometimes not at all, and during one transaction the price actually increased. Just want you to be aware of what happens sometimes in securing a great name like this.

I suggest you make an offer in your comfort zone and I will do my level best to get you a very aggressive counter-offer and (hopefully) an acceptance.

As a side note, I've sold names that were much lower quality than this one, for 2 and 3 times the price so this represents a pretty good value. What price would you like me to try at?

 

[Eric Lyon]

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[ben pedri]

Hey Eric what do you think of that pitch ,it's the best I've ever seen myself

 

[Grego85]

That's obviously a DomainNameSales.com broker, they are very good.

 

[ben pedri]

That's obviously a DomainNameSales.com broker, they are very good.

This one is good, some dnsales are just plain garbage asking for 20k for a domain worth $200,even though we can see through this as BS. someone who came to a parked page and clicked the link would fall for it.It also warns politely to the buyer that please make a decent bid,and probably deters bidders from making lowball offers.

If anyone has an adjustment they can add ,Please share.

 

[Asfas1000]

Great sales pitch I received from an inquiry I think it's great:

THanks, can you share your offer amount ?

 

[AEProgram]

This one is good, some dnsales are just plain garbage asking for 20k for a domain worth $200,even though we can see through this as BS. someone who came to a parked page and clicked the link would fall for it.It also warns politely to the buyer that please make a decent bid,and probably deters bidders from making lowball offers.

If anyone has an adjustment they can add ,Please share.

We should all be thankful that DNS demands respectable prices when finally someone shows up looking to buy. The beauty of a domain is in the eye of the person looking to buy it, if you need proof just look at recent sales data.

The person looking to lowball will not get scared, he will just lowball a little less, the person who made up their mind to not spend more than X might get worried but if he wants the domain bad enough he wont just close the page. If he doesnt want it bad enough you will not get any money for your domain anyway, unless you enjoy getting paid peanuts for quality domains, that is if you have a quality domain in the first place.

 

[usernamex]

I think it is brilliant, but shouldn't it be seller in the first sentence?
Thank you for your offer. I sincerely appreciate it (and your patience) as we work with this buyer. As you may already know the price of this domain is $1,200.00.

 

[premkumar]

In this you are domain owner or seller, little confused.

"I sincerely appreciate it (and your patience) as we work with this buyer."

Above one point you like a seller.


"I've seen this seller discount a previous sale by 15-20%, but sometimes not at all, and during one transaction the price actually increased. "

The above one look like you are buyer

Is their any mistake in the sentence addressing the target audience

 

[alcy]

I never read sale pitch longer than 2 lines. and really appreciate max 1 line.
so do unto others like u want done to u

 

[premkumar]

I never read sale pitch longer than 2 lines. and really appreciate max 1 line.
so do unto others like u want done to u

We domainers may not like it, but startup or end user desperate to get hands on the domain name, may be hungry to know more about the domain name. Infact many may not have knowledge on how domain sale works. so such thing works well, marketing firms are well oiled ones, they test and improve constantly.

 

[alcy]

We domainers may not like it, but startup or end user desperate to get hands on the domain name, may be hungry to know more about the domain name. Infact many may not have knowledge on how domain sale works. so such thing works well, marketing firms are well oiled ones, they test and improve constantly.

I think straight to the point is the only way. but that's just my view.
domain name + price.
no hi no bye no bs. jmo.

 

[Brandworthy]

That's one of the DNS auto-response templates. It's well written, and does well to generate a little urgency around pricing IMO.

 

[ben pedri]

I think it is brilliant, but shouldn't it be seller unless somehow i screwed iin the first sentence?
Thank you for your offer. I sincerely appreciate it (and your patience) as we work with this buyer. As you may already know the price of this domain is $1,200.00.

Your right I didn't catch that

 

[Name Trader]

That's obviously a DomainNameSales.com broker, they are very good.

I can't say definitively if its DNS or not. But it sounds like a DNS broker, for sure. And I agree, they are very good. So good to the point of being annoying, sometimes. I've always been very impressed with their sales pitch.

 

[loredan]

I can't say definitively if its DNS or not. But it sounds like a DNS broker, for sure. And I agree, they are very good. So good to the point of being annoying, sometimes. I've always been very impressed with their sales pitch.

Its DNS 100% One of their brokers sent a very similar email to someone interested in a domain of mine.

 

[ben pedri]

it is DNS