Domain landing page - olympicrv.com

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  1. mr-x

    mr-x Acme Domains Business Account VIP ★★★★★★★★★★

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    http://olympicrv.com/
    Full size screenshot attached. Trying to tune the message, your thoughts, suggestions would be appreciated

    Edit*
    I've included the PHP scripts I use to read / write the chart data and handle the form.

    Just save the page with your browser if you want a copy for your own to work with.
     

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  2. WatchDogue

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    Overall believe the lander to be very well done and self-explanatory.

    IMO - without benefit of studies or evidence to support this opinion, might like to see a bit bolder or perhaps brighter color use - just a thought.

    IMO as well - reviewing this statement "Several studies show descriptive domain names can lower customer aquisition cost based on four factors:" - I might ( !?) use the word " your " between lower and customer - just to make the statement a bit more personalized.

    Overall again - a very well done and self-explanatory lander.

    Great phone number by the way!
     
  3. TLDnic

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    Great lander. Very clean and clear.
     
  4. MasterOfMyDomains

    MasterOfMyDomains Active Member VIP

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    Looks great on pc and mobile.

    you have a typo on losing. You spelled loosing
     
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  5. MasterOfMyDomains

    MasterOfMyDomains Active Member VIP

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    One of the nicest landers i have seen. How much to build me one, in my control panel?
    Or did you use a special website builder/theme?
     
  6. alcy

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    I only see problem how to create this lander for many/bulk domains (in time efficient way).. but other than this, its very nice!
     
  7. mr-x

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    You can have the source for free. The chart uses a php script that parses the webalizer history file. I setup my .htaccess to deny referral spam so visitor count is close.

    ** Edit:
    I'll post a zip file with everything included.
     
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  8. mr-x

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    I'm working on a solution, no delivery date though
     
  9. Asfas1000

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    Looks very nice. How do you handle the payment plan option. manually ?
     
  10. mr-x

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    PayPal pro account, recurring payment that runs for a fixed period. You could do the same with stripe pretty easy.
     
  11. deez007

    deez007 The More I Learn The Less I "Know" VIP

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    Looks Awesome dude....

    Only change I would suggest is (I know it might an colossal pain in the ass to try do it properly in Wordpress) but in your image slide where you have:

    Buy OlympicRV.com
    for your website name!


    I would maybe try lay it out like this instead:

    Buy
    OlympicRV.com
    For Your Website Name

    With the domain name being in different color than the rest of the text

    Other than that I think the lander is perfect!
     
  12. mr-x

    mr-x Acme Domains Business Account VIP ★★★★★★★★★★

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    Thanks! Not WP, just html / css with a PHP script to make the chart data and handle the form response.
     
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    Good suggestion, I'll give it a try.
     
  14. spikedo

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    That's a very clean lander. I like it! The only two minor issues I see is (1) the logo in upper left corner looks a bit clip-art-ish and (2) do you really need to show traffic stats? Regarding the latter, I think your prospective customers would care less about the domian's traffic, purchasing the domain purely for the brand value. But really nice job overall. I've been looking to try my own lander using Stripe. Do you have to set up a page individually for each domain?
     
  15. vkwebdev

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    Very nice and clean, loved it!
     
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    mr-x Acme Domains Business Account VIP ★★★★★★★★★★

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    Thanks. I'll remove the stats in the next version and include a form. I setup a page for each domain. I could simplify this to work based the host name so you can could have many domains using the same page. * I included the scripts I use to make the chart data and handle the form.

    I'll post an updated version next week if I have time.
     
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  17. emile123

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    Looks very nice!
    This is very helpful!

    Where can I find the php files to create something similar for my domains?
    thank you
     
  18. mr-x

    mr-x Acme Domains Business Account VIP ★★★★★★★★★★

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    Save the page ( olympicrv.com ) using your browser as a complete web page. That save all the html, css, javascript and images. Copy the files attached to the original post. Just remove the .txt, i.e. change contact.php.txt to contact.php and Bob's your uncle.

    If you need help, let me know by direct message.
     
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  19. Corey

    Corey Established Member

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    registrar & renewal date = ?

    btw the term Olympic is trademarked!

    Cheers
    Corey
     
  20. mr-x

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    Olympic is also a location in Washington state.
     

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