domain What do you think about this domain for sale lander?

jideofor said:

Okay,

I decided set up something on a domain name I own... it was done in a hurry yesterday but you can check it out and let me know what you think...

Click on Intrinsic Homes to have a look.

Let me know what you think...

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looks neat & clean..
very good

Riz M. said:

looks neat & clean..
very good

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Thank you.

Its nice, I would make :

The features section smaller, less words & less scrolling.

The background smth solid, a pic, or a color.

All in all, nice.

I liked it.

Just a few things to think about:

If a content on mobile device is the same (I did not check so deep), then the visitor from a smartphone will see too many extra info on his screen, and so he may not have enough patience to scroll down up to the page end.

Google fonts may be blocked in China together with the whole Google services, so Chinese visitors will likely have some page load delay first, and will see the page with their system-default english fonts finally.

Email info @ intrinsichomes . com is in clear text, not protected in any way, and so it will appear in spam databases and quickly

https is a must thing, first because there is a form so some browsers may start complaining before or after it is filled (even if the form content itself is transferred securely), second because "secure purchase" slogan on a page which itself is not https may be suspicious for some potential customers

Nice but I almost missed the fact that there is more if I scrolled down. I would have surely missed it if I wasn't sent specifically to check it.

Moreover,
instead for the email to be easily viewable (and maybe crawlable), I would have hidden it in the button 'contact the owner' (which btw. doesn't switch to any contact page but instead it redirects to the home page)

It's nice. But I agree with @tonyk2000 about it should be https (pretty much essential) and mobile problems, and @MS-Domains about the length. (It was too long) IMHO. I wondered when it was ever going to end. I do think using WordPress for a landing page is overkill. But that's maybe just me. Butt overall, very good. Could do better

Sorry, but i don’t like it.
i am looking at it with my iphone and it does not look good.
It looks like this...

This domain
name
InstrinsicHomes
.com is for
Sale

Keep it simple.
Don’t need to explain why your domain is good. Most people will not read all that bottom crap.

This is all you need - 4 simple lines...

InstrinsicHomes.com is for sale

Buy Now $49,000

[email protected]

1-888-123-4567

jideofor said:

Okay,

I decided set up something on a domain name I own... it was done in a hurry yesterday but you can check it out and let me know what you think...

Click on Intrinsic Homes to have a look.

Let me know what you think...

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1) Delete "This Domain Name"
2) "Buy Now!" leads to an offer form, not a purchase form.
3) Faked client testimonials are dishonest. Why would I buy a name from a dishonest person.
4) This domain has no traffic. How will you get people to view this page?

mr-x said:

1) Delete "This Domain Name"
2) "Buy Now!" leads to an offer form, not a purchase form.
3) Faked client testimonials are dishonest. Why would I buy a name from a dishonest person.
4) This domain has no traffic. How will you get people to view this page?

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Thanks for your input. That was why I asked for insights in the first place...

Thanks to everyone that has commented. I will make the necessary changes by weekend.