advice Last sentence in email to end user?

Igor Mironyuk · Oct 4, 2018

Which last sentence must be in email to end user?

Do you interested in this domain?
Do you want to buy this domain?

or WHAT?

Which is better(I mean not only my written above)?

DeliDomains · Oct 9, 2018

I've sold a domain at 22500 Euro after I refused the buyers initial offer of 7000 Euro on a auction platform.
Below is the mail I've sent six months later after the deal fell apart,
"
Hi ______
Just dropped a mail to let you know that __________ is still up for grabs. If your are interested we can do a direct selling thru Escrow. The price should work out as there would be no brokerage fee. I would prefer selling directly than auctions / websites with high brokerage fee.

Let me know if you would be interested. "

Got a reply, kept negotiating and closed the deal 8 months later.

Kate · Oct 9, 2018

I think you will struggle to sell these names, the problem isn't even the sales pitch. Even the best sales pitch cannot sell domains nobody wants.

TOP gTLD · Oct 10, 2018

Pierre Barnard said:
BUY IT...or else...

Fab one! How on earth I never thought of it myself

Joe N · Oct 10, 2018

Igor Mironyuk said:
On Saturday I sent some emails "short" and Sunday - 1 email "detailed"

"Short":
Hello.
I am selling domain names SouthernUkraine.com, Nikolaev.co,
Kherson.today, NikolaevPhotos.com. Would you be interested in
acquiring them?

"Detailed":
Hello.

I live in Ukraine and write you for the following:
Ukraine geographically locates between Asia and Europe and connects them. In Ukraine the most fertile lands in the world especially in southern regions of Ukraine. That's why I am selling my domain SouthernUkraine.com for $3000. Ukrainian fertile lands determine the value of the domain.

You can quickly purchase this domain by following this link and click Buy now near this domain:

https://sedo.com/search/?member=5c1d5f678d21c9912e8520d993da87bdeb1a78b9

Get it now while somebody else not purchased this domain!

And "Short" and "Detailed" emails I sent to companies who works with Ukraine. I am owner of the domain SouthernUkraine.com and some other GEO ukrainian domains. "Detailed" emails I sent to agriculture company who work with Ukraine.

On the now no responses.

What I wrote wrong?

I would not use the detailed template. Fertile lands have nothing to do with domain value, and I don't think any buyers are going to be tricked into thinking otherwise.

Can you give us some examples of the buyers you're approaching who would be interested in all these names?

Corey · Oct 10, 2018

Last sentence...

Thank you for considering purchasing domain.name. We look forward to doing business with you!

RGkiiing · Dec 9, 2018

DomainVP said:
And that's why most people in the world are garbage at sales.

Do you REALLY know what a call to action is? Most people don't.

HERE
Nail your Cold Email Call To Action: 10 Techniques to Boost your Response Rates

Domaining is full of lazy shortcut takers. You do what makes you happy, but this industry is also full of people that are killing it because they take the time to learn every nuance of marketing and sales.

Directly from a sales professional:

Simply asking someone if they want the name is a weak sales strategy that forces you to spend more money at the point of acquisition in order to acquire domains that sell themselves.

Millions of domains can't sell themselves, so YOU have to. Or be lazy, whatever makes you happy.

Even in this link one of the strategies says to end with a yes/no question

DomainVP · Dec 10, 2018

RGkiiing said:
Even in this link one of the strategies says to end with a yes/no question

Listen buttercup, if that's what you get from that article then you go ahead and do you.

The article clearly says not to ask yes/no questions directly in relation to buying decisions.

But you would know that if you hadn't sped through the bullet points and then wanted to run back and post a jab at me.

This is why lazy domainers suck at sales.

You lazily read through an article for lazy/poor results.

Merry Christmas.

The Durfer · Dec 10, 2018

haha I have it and you don't, nannynannybooboo.

RGkiiing · Dec 10, 2018

DomainVP said:
Listen buttercup, if that's what you get from that article then you go ahead and do you.

The article clearly says not to ask yes/no questions directly in relation to buying decisions.

But you would know that if you hadn't sped through the bullet points and then wanted to run back and post a jab at me.

This is why lazy domainers suck at sales.

You lazily read through an article for lazy/poor results.

Merry Christmas.

not sure why youre upset.. you posted a link that lists ending with a question as a call to action

its not "what i got". Its what it says

DomainVP · Dec 10, 2018

RGkiiing said:
its not "what i got". Its what it says

Here is what the "words" say...

"The call to action in the above cold email is a simple confirmation question. It is not trying to sell anything yet. There is no request for a call or a demo. Just a yes/no question that helps you start a conversation with your prospect."

If you recall, OP states the following...

Igor Mironyuk said:
Which last sentence must be in email to end user?

Do you interested in this domain?
Do you want to buy this domain?

or WHAT?

The discussion was based on simply asking someone if they want the name.

So again, this is NOT what to do. Even the article agrees.

You are hyper focusing on the wrong shi*.

I didn't say NEVER ASK A QUESTION EVER, what I said was that you shouldn't end a eMail with a question - instead use a direct call to action and gave a helpful article to give people TEN ideas on how to do that other than ending with a open ended question. Which really works only if you can craft a conversation in the language of your targeted buyer - which OP was struggling to do as well.

RGkiiing said:
not sure why youre upset..

Nobody is "upset". You took the imitative to dig up a thread that ended in October to make a point.

Now I'm making a point: You can speak wisdom to a man. but it's up to the man to open their mind.

You have closed your mind, and I have closed my part of this conversation.

Good day.

RGkiiing · Dec 10, 2018

DomainVP said:
Here is what the "words" say...

If you recall, OP states the following...

The discussion was based on simply asking someone if they want the name.

So again, this is NOT what to do. Even the article agrees.

You are hyper focusing on the wrong shi*.

I didn't say NEVER ASK A QUESTION EVER, what I said was that you shouldn't end a eMail with a question - instead use a direct call to action and gave a helpful article to give people TEN ideas on how to do that other than ending with a open ended question. Which really works only if you can craft a conversation in the language of your targeted buyer - which OP was struggling to do as well.

Nobody is "upset". You took the imitative to dig up a thread that ended in October to make a point.

Now I'm making a point: You can speak wisdom to a man. but it's up to the man to open their mind.

You have closed your mind, and I have closed my part of this conversation.

Good day.

in the article where it says "The call to action in the above cold email is a simple confirmation question. It is not trying to sell anything yet. There is no request for a call or a demo. Just a yes/no question that helps you start a conversation with your prospect."

that does not translate into dont ask yes/no questions directly in relation to buying decisions, which is what you said.

i didnt bump the thread to call you out i was just looking at diff opinions and pointed it out. No biggie

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