My first webpage, review

balco101 · 06-16-2005, 01:35 PM

here is the site

http://www.auto-park-inc.com

http://www.auto-park-inc.com/cars.html

http://www.auto-park-inc.com/cars/2003camryle.html

Please review these.
About the dead links. I'm working on them.

Need help also on what kind of affiliate programs should I add, and to what page should I add them too.

Thanks big time

Andy

Jon_ · 06-16-2005, 01:37 PM

It looks pretty good.

But one thing that bothers me is the navagation links.. Maybe images, or change the font..?

def1 · 06-16-2005, 01:42 PM

its cool but the third page was kind of boring but still not bad

balco101 · 06-16-2005, 01:43 PM

should I make them smaller or larger what font would you recommend.

are the colors hard on the eyes?

thanks

def1

what part of it was boring?
need advice

these kind of pages are posted on my ebay listing

thanks

sitedevelopment · 06-16-2005, 01:51 PM

nice template lol, but u have mucked up the css

balco101 · 06-16-2005, 01:54 PM

mucked up the css?
what do you mean,
did you make it into a css format?

should i bother learning css?

Thanks

should I change the main logos?
the lexus cars, and if I should.
What should I put there?

Thanks

StudioWorks · 06-16-2005, 04:14 PM

I think i've reviewed this web site some time ago ..

balco101 · 06-16-2005, 05:53 PM

maybe you have reviewed my site.
but it has been updated

what do you think of it now?
thanks

GJ · 06-17-2005, 02:41 PM

Good work, Very good for your first!

vip-ip · 06-17-2005, 03:00 PM

TemplateSpace template, heh? :-)
Nice, but unoriginal

Sorry, but I like it though.

-Ray- · 06-17-2005, 03:03 PM

not bad, for one of my templates, that was sold to zymic.com

unknowngiver · 06-17-2005, 04:39 PM

I dont like the tables u r using...makes ur site look ugly...

bhyraj · 06-18-2005, 12:25 AM

nice and clean work

se · 06-18-2005, 01:23 AM

template eh?...well..not much to comment than..

Veolus · 06-18-2005, 01:47 AM

It looks like a free template from template monster but it's still not bad. You need to fix the text a little bit because on some parts, you are using Times New Roman and on other parts you are using Verdana and it can make the site look really unprofessional because your site is about car sales.

The part where it says "Links to Our Partners" is really unprofessional IMHO. The font is a bit too large and the font colour doesn't match with the blue gradient in the background. Maybe try centerizing the text and changing the font colour to white and make the text a little smaller.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/99186-my-first-webpage-review.html

Also, the Auto Park Inc text on the top doesn't really look too professional and it looks really plain and ugly. You should try a font like Tahoma or Verdana instead

That's all i have to say

Good luck with your site and i hope i have been of help

06-16-2005, 01:35 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
balco101 NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 26	My first webpage, review here is the site http://www.auto-park-inc.com http://www.auto-park-inc.com/cars.html http://www.auto-park-inc.com/cars/2003camryle.html Please review these. About the dead links. I'm working on them. Need help also on what kind of affiliate programs should I add, and to what page should I add them too. Thanks big time Andy

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06-16-2005, 01:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
Jon_ NamePros Regular Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 372	It looks pretty good. But one thing that bothers me is the navagation links.. Maybe images, or change the font..?

06-16-2005, 01:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
def1 Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,538	its cool but the third page was kind of boring but still not bad

06-16-2005, 01:43 PM	THREAD STARTER #4 (permalink)
balco101 NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 26	should I make them smaller or larger what font would you recommend. are the colors hard on the eyes? thanks def1 what part of it was boring? need advice these kind of pages are posted on my ebay listing thanks

06-16-2005, 01:51 PM	#5 (permalink)
sitedevelopment Account Suspended Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 12	nice template lol, but u have mucked up the css

06-16-2005, 01:54 PM	THREAD STARTER #6 (permalink)
balco101 NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 26	mucked up the css? what do you mean, did you make it into a css format? should i bother learning css? Thanks should I change the main logos? the lexus cars, and if I should. What should I put there? Thanks

06-16-2005, 05:53 PM	THREAD STARTER #8 (permalink)
balco101 NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 26	maybe you have reviewed my site. but it has been updated what do you think of it now? thanks

06-17-2005, 02:41 PM	#9 (permalink)
GJ Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,227	Good work, Very good for your first!

06-17-2005, 03:00 PM	#10 (permalink)
vip-ip Account Closed Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: root@localhost Posts: 4,025	TemplateSpace template, heh? :-) Nice, but unoriginal Sorry, but I like it though.

06-18-2005, 01:23 AM	#14 (permalink)
se Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: E://my computer/namepros/post.exe Posts: 1,685	template eh?...well..not much to comment than.. __________________ Cheap Dedicated Server, Free direct Admin Cheap Webhosting :hehe:

06-18-2005, 01:47 AM	#15 (permalink)
Veolus Account Suspended Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Australia Posts: 4,309	It looks like a free template from template monster but it's still not bad. You need to fix the text a little bit because on some parts, you are using Times New Roman and on other parts you are using Verdana and it can make the site look really unprofessional because your site is about car sales. The part where it says "Links to Our Partners" is really unprofessional IMHO. The font is a bit too large and the font colour doesn't match with the blue gradient in the background. Maybe try centerizing the text and changing the font colour to white and make the text a little smaller. ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/99186-my-first-webpage-review.html Also, the *Auto Park Inc* text on the top doesn't really look too professional and it looks really plain and ugly. You should try a font like Tahoma or Verdana instead That's all i have to say Good luck with your site and i hope i have been of help

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