Please Review My Site....

bhyraj · 06-15-2005, 08:54 PM

Please review my site......

This is my first site. Please send me feedback......

My Site

Thanks in advance.

Genialnames · 06-15-2005, 10:07 PM

sorry it doesn't look that good
the images are too poor quality (much compression?)
then the pink-salmon backround is....too much intense and meaningless.

But the thing that really doesn't looks good is that text, it is not a text it is a gif....

I hope you where looking for an honest review.

After all you have arranged all this, it has required some work from your side ,right?
I am sure you can do quit a lot better, just have more patience and use a good editor.

Good luck.

StudioWorks · 06-16-2005, 07:38 AM

Well if this is your first web site i say it looks good. There is still much work that needs to be done tho.

Best of luck,

- DM

bhyraj · 06-16-2005, 08:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genialnames

sorry it doesn't look that good
the images are too poor quality (much compression?)
then the pink-salmon backround is....too much intense and meaningless.

But the thing that really doesn't looks good is that text, it is not a text it is a gif....

I hope you where looking for an honest review.

After all you have arranged all this, it has required some work from your side ,right?
I am sure you can do quit a lot better, just have more patience and use a good editor.

Good luck.

Thanks Genialnames,

I change there.

Quote:

Originally Posted by StudioWorks

Well if this is your first web site i say it looks good. There is still much work that needs to be done tho.

Best of luck,

- DM

Thanks StudioWorks,

I try to better result. Thanks for suggestion.

deadhippo · 06-16-2005, 09:37 AM

try simplify it
i dont want to offend you but that side is pretty ugly
what i mean is the colurs clash, you dont need that wooden thing
just because some effect is available doesnt mean you have to use it

if you need those big ugly search bars try to integrate them in the page more

the typeset is too small..you should retype as text
get rid of those silly pictures and make one nice gaphic..take your time

i advise you to start again with a picure in mind
have a look at some web sites and choose the elements that suit you and try to recreated them and go from there

Phoog · 06-16-2005, 02:35 PM

I think its great for your first site, you should have seen mine, but hey, today Im working as a webbdesigner full time. Keep up the good work man.

Genialnames · 06-16-2005, 02:45 PM

You're a cool guy.

Let me say that I 've been very impressed instead by the content......you have done there a superb job,
I wonder how you could have all that skill !
Can I ask how old are you?

StudioWorks · 06-16-2005, 03:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bhyraj

Thanks StudioWorks,

I try to better result. Thanks for suggestion.

You're welcome! Let us know if you make any changes to it.

- DM

sufi · 06-16-2005, 10:05 PM

It looks messy, sorry

Genialnames · 06-16-2005, 10:36 PM

Quote:

I like to create names and test my skill.......

...If you like this proposal then we arrange the details.

Let me know.

OK got some nice one,
just answer here "PM me the ideas" and I will PM it to you,
if you like it and you register it you will pay me, if you don't like it nothing happen.
I will publish here , public, after one hour I pmd to you (just for safe)

Peace

kpm547 · 06-17-2005, 08:04 AM

It doesn't look very good.

I don't like the colours. Everything is disjointed and all over the place. The banner is of poor quality.

Keep working on it. You'll get it.

GJ · 06-17-2005, 01:39 PM

It is a mish mash of diffrent designs and all over the place.
That pink background is a no no!

bhyraj · 06-17-2005, 11:14 PM

Thanks All.

Quote:

Originally Posted by deadhippo

try simplify it
i dont want to offend you but that side is pretty ugly
what i mean is the colurs clash, you dont need that wooden thing
just because some effect is available doesnt mean you have to use it

if you need those big ugly search bars try to integrate them in the page more

the typeset is too small..you should retype as text
get rid of those silly pictures and make one nice gaphic..take your time

i advise you to start again with a picure in mind
have a look at some web sites and choose the elements that suit you and try to recreated them and go from there

Thanks you.

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Genialnames NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Italy Posts: 794 364.05 NP$ (Donate)	sorry it doesn't look that good the images are too poor quality (much compression?) then the pink-salmon backround is....too much intense and meaningless. But the thing that really doesn't looks good is that text, it is not a text it is a gif.... I hope you where looking for an honest review. After all you have arranged all this, it has required some work from your side ,right? I am sure you can do quit a lot better, just have more patience and use a good editor. Good luck. __________________ www.genialnames.com Mostly developable Domain Names...because the name says it all! Olympionic.com it's mine, it could be your!

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deadhippo NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Yokohama Posts: 75 151.75 NP$ (Donate)	try simplify it i dont want to offend you but that side is pretty ugly what i mean is the colurs clash, you dont need that wooden thing just because some effect is available doesnt mean you have to use it if you need those big ugly search bars try to integrate them in the page more the typeset is too small..you should retype as text get rid of those silly pictures and make one nice gaphic..take your time i advise you to start again with a picure in mind have a look at some web sites and choose the elements that suit you and try to recreated them and go from there __________________ The Shirt List deadhippo.com

06-16-2005, 02:45 PM	#7 (permalink)
Genialnames NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Italy Posts: 794 364.05 NP$ (Donate)	You're a cool guy. Let me say that I 've been very impressed instead by the content......you have done there a superb job, I wonder how you could have all that skill ! Can I ask how old are you? __________________ www.genialnames.com Mostly developable Domain Names...because the name says it all! Olympionic.com it's mine, it could be your!

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06-16-2005, 07:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
StudioWorks no one lives forever Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: NamePros Posts: 8,097 110.31 NP$ (Donate)	Well if this is your first web site i say it looks good. There is still much work that needs to be done tho. Best of luck, - DM

06-16-2005, 02:35 PM	#6 (permalink)
Phoog NamePros Regular Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sweden Posts: 353 14.20 NP$ (Donate)	I think its great for your first site, you should have seen mine, but hey, today Im working as a webbdesigner full time. Keep up the good work man.

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kpm547 NamePros Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 171 256.00 NP$ (Donate)	It doesn't look very good. I don't like the colours. Everything is disjointed and all over the place. The banner is of poor quality. Keep working on it. You'll get it. __________________ www.twocrazyducks.com - Two Crazy Ducks Web Hosting - Lethbridge, Alberta www.lasara.org - Lethbridge Area Search and Rescue themuellers.ca - The Mueller Family Webpage jobsitestructures.com - Job Site Structures Ltd. - for all your site office and accomodation needs!

06-17-2005, 01:39 PM	#12 (permalink)
GJ Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,256 986.40 NP$ (Donate)	It is a mish mash of diffrent designs and all over the place. That pink background is a no no!

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