I need some advice on my web copy please!

moneytizers · 04-22-2005, 06:30 AM

Hello,

Could you please review my site at:
http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/

I need some advice on my web copy please!

Ralph Nunes

bhyraj · 04-22-2005, 09:00 AM

First I like background. attractive for money maker. great site.

.Mike · 04-22-2005, 11:24 AM

nice site, but the first thing I thought of was the 100's of HTML spam emails I get a day. I think this was caused by the instant impact title text - This might be the image you are going for though?

Good luck!

Ps - the background works well though!

bhyraj · 04-23-2005, 12:52 AM

I see good site. best background design. good job.

alegend · 04-23-2005, 05:46 PM

background and header look awesome!

.X. · 04-23-2005, 07:12 PM

Real nice job,Clean,Nice appeal.Great work.

bhyraj · 04-23-2005, 11:07 PM

Proffesionel site. good site layout. color combination. great work out.

painperdu · 04-23-2005, 11:14 PM

I would never buy anything from http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/. It looks like a scam site where you would post links to it on forums and scam members to review it.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/84385-i-need-some-advice-my-web.html

http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/ seems like countless other creative scam marketing posts scattered all over the net. My advice would be to try to make it not look like a scam site.

Maybe put up a few anti scam buttons like from the BBB or even from http://www.adbusters.org/home/ so that people will lnow what is a scam and what is it.

Like another poster said, it does look like a spam email.

I would never buy anything from the http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/

will7 · 04-24-2005, 05:30 AM

'Fraid I agree with painperdu! It really does look like one of those "send us $50 and we'll tell you how to make $10,000,000,000 in 2 minutes" scams. Sorry, but those are really bad sites and I have no time for them!

sufi · 04-24-2005, 09:00 AM

Looks cool. A typical get rich quickly website design

GJ · 04-26-2005, 01:05 AM

I like it, Well done!

SearchLightning.com · 04-29-2005, 12:02 PM

Good design and layout....did you create this yourself or did you hire someone to do it for you?

WebDP · 04-29-2005, 12:59 PM

i like the background.its unique...but you might want to give it a little professional touch...red text and large fonts doesnt really make people comfortable...you might want to change that.

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.Mike Made in the U.K. Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Gods country Posts: 940	nice site, but the first thing I thought of was the 100's of HTML spam emails I get a day. I think this was caused by the instant impact title text - This might be the image you are going for though? Good luck! Ps - the background works well though! __________________ :music:

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04-23-2005, 11:14 PM	#8 (permalink)
painperdu NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Louisiana, USA Posts: 658	I would never buy anything from http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/. It looks like a scam site where you would post links to it on forums and scam members to review it. ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/84385-i-need-some-advice-my-web.html http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/ seems like countless other creative scam marketing posts scattered all over the net. My advice would be to try to make it not look like a scam site. Maybe put up a few anti scam buttons like from the BBB or even from http://www.adbusters.org/home/ so that people will lnow what is a scam and what is it. Like another poster said, it does look like a spam email. I would never buy anything from the http://www.makingmoneyonlinekit.com/ __________________ dotbob.com -Cheap Domain Name Registrations/Unlimited Web Hosting Plan $5.98/month

04-24-2005, 05:30 AM	#9 (permalink)
will7 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 2,694	'Fraid I agree with painperdu! It really does look like one of those "send us $50 and we'll tell you how to make $10,000,000,000 in 2 minutes" scams. Sorry, but those are really bad sites and I have no time for them! __________________ Will Narburgh \| Graphic design \| Twitter \| Email me

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bhyraj Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,023	First I like background. attractive for money maker. great site.

04-23-2005, 12:52 AM	#4 (permalink)
bhyraj Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,023	I see good site. best background design. good job.

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.X. Revolution Calling! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: NamePros Avenue Posts: 5,807	Real nice job,Clean,Nice appeal.Great work.

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bhyraj Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,023	Proffesionel site. good site layout. color combination. great work out.

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sufi NamePros Expert Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: LinksHut.com Posts: 7,697	Looks cool. A typical get rich quickly website design __________________ Social Bookmarking Service - 100 Bookmarks + BONUS for just $5

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GJ Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,227	I like it, Well done!

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04-29-2005, 12:59 PM	#13 (permalink)
WebDP New Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 10	i like the background.its unique...but you might want to give it a little professional touch...red text and large fonts doesnt really make people comfortable...you might want to change that. __________________ WebDP SurferDude:wave: Web Designs Provider "No sense being pessimistic, it probably wouldn't work anyway."

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