Looking for a quick review

npgamer · 04-10-2005, 02:23 PM

I updated my site a ton in the past couple days, now i need to know what else to improve on it? Thanks. Im a noob to web design

http://www.randyreynolds.tk

Jed K · 04-10-2005, 03:19 PM

Hey, npgamer.
-Don't worry, everyone needs to start somewhere.

If it were me, I'd start by making the "Flash Games," "Image Gallery," etc links bigger.
-They're a bit hard to read at the moment.

Next, I'd move those ads down a bit so that the top of them is aligned with the bottom of your top graphic.
...as of right now, they are a bit overbearing. Moving them down will cause the top graphic/navigation to be the center of attention, as opposed to the big ads.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/81718-looking-for-a-quick-review.html

As for the design of the rest of the pages... I'd tell you, but they were taking ages to load, so I just gave up.

Cheers.

GJ · 04-11-2005, 10:35 AM

Make the links bigger.

SB_GEMINI · 04-11-2005, 10:39 AM

Agree with GJ Online about the links their way to small,

lose the yellow border, make the text in the header stick out more, also lower the opacity of the soldier and make the text another color.

Hope this helps

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04-10-2005, 03:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
Jed K o-re-sa-ma Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,620	Hey, npgamer. -Don't worry, everyone needs to start somewhere. If it were me, I'd start by making the "Flash Games," "Image Gallery," etc links bigger. -They're a bit hard to read at the moment. Next, I'd move those ads down a bit so that the top of them is aligned with the bottom of your top graphic. ...as of right now, they are a bit overbearing. Moving them down will cause the top graphic/navigation to be the center of attention, as opposed to the big ads. ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/81718-looking-for-a-quick-review.html As for the design of the rest of the pages... I'd tell you, but they were taking ages to load, so I just gave up. Cheers.

04-11-2005, 10:35 AM	#3 (permalink)
GJ Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,226	Make the links bigger.

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