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Old 03-21-2005, 02:49 PM THREAD STARTER               #1 (permalink)
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Work in progress


I am just creating this site in any spare lesuire time I get

http://www.geocities.com/a_j_oggie

I realise its hosted on geocities, but I cant be bothered getting a proper host until its complete . Any feedback and creative ideas would be appreciated, even criticism is welcome. This is my first ever site so any advice from the experienced would be appreciated .

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Old 03-21-2005, 03:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Sweet!!! I love it! and.. even for being on geocities.. this is a really high quality lookin' site! I love that flash element added to it.. spiffy!
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Old 03-21-2005, 03:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I don't really like the green on black to much but that's just my taste. Other than that good site but it needs more work done. Find another place to host it.
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Old 03-21-2005, 05:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It looks awesome! I like how the whole thing is in flash, and the colors being used.
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Old 03-21-2005, 08:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Good design but you should also use the blank space on top right area
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Old 03-21-2005, 08:34 PM   #6 (permalink)
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NICE NICE ... it is very clean and to the point
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Old 03-21-2005, 09:16 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Best looking thing on geocities I have ever seen. You should look into getting a web host!
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Old 03-21-2005, 11:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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i dunno... it's good but seems basic, like the color scheme is kind of.. cliche, you know? black and bright green. I do like the flash site, but i think because you are using flash, it should be a little more flashy (its ahrd to say what i'm thinking)
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yeah i understand you mike gangl i shall try and make things a bit more flashy as i develop it, and thanks alot for all the feedback people it is appreciated . About using the space to the right, i was considering putting possibly a java menu, or just generally putting something other than flash there, but i dont know, i shall experiment to see what looks best. I admit the cliche colours were a sort of spin off the xbox colour regieme .
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Anyway thanks again, Adam

Oh and I will be hosting it (properly), but only after its completed, or at least has all the needed context there.
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Pretty nice!Cool flash animations and site design!
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I like it but change the nav bar font!
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Originally Posted by OJay
Oh and I will be hosting it (properly), but only after its completed, or at least has all the needed context there.
If you need any help with finding a host, or transfering your files to your new host. Please PM me, I'd be glad to help!
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I would change the font on the navigation bar, and also change the logo to something else otherwise pretty good
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its alright.
But you could do better.
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Old 03-25-2005, 08:13 AM THREAD STARTER               #15 (permalink)
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Wow, I didn't realise you guys were still posting here, again thanks for all the feedback and im sorry for neglecting you . I will be changing the font of the navigation bar seen as 2 of you suggested it, so ii will experiment with that.
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Joe thanks for your kind offer, it is appreciated. I have added you to my buddy list so when I get round to completing the site, I may contact you for hosting help .

Thanks alot people! I shall make some adjustments to the site, make it more "professional", and will post a new thread once its completed so you can all comment on the end product.

Cheers, Adam
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