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Old 03-17-2005, 01:03 PM THREAD STARTER               #1 (permalink)
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plz review my design(my first design)


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plz rewiew my design.how many miss take in design
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Old 03-17-2005, 03:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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it looks a little messed up, like the images don't line up.

Also.. what is that flashing thing in the top-right hand corner... I know you mean well, but it is ugly, distracting and annoying.

You have the colors and images right though, just maybe need to tidy it up a bit. Don't use that awful grey color either. Use a nice, pale blue if you can.

Looks good for a first try though!

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Old 03-17-2005, 09:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Design is very good but the flashing image on top right of page sucks.. You should substitute it with something catchy.
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Old 03-17-2005, 10:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Like the colors, i wouldn't change them. The flash in the top right, i'd lose that, as i think it takes away from the cleaness of the design. Some of the images don't line up as they should, so you will want to look into that.

Overall for your first design, very good

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Old 03-17-2005, 10:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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images don't line up, and it looks like some of the images where taken from another site.. latest news content box could be fixed up a little. It is very good for your first design though! Good Luck with your others.
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Old 03-17-2005, 10:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Wow, that's you first design? Very very nice. Your html is a bit screwed up and the images don't align quite right, but your headed in a great direction. If this is your first, I can't even imagine what your future ones will look like. Keep it up!
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thanks


thanks all of u .now i remove these error which occure in my template
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Old 03-18-2005, 12:25 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Nice colors and flash movie, but all the bars and gradiates are ****ed up. They are missing pixles and etc. so they need work!

Appart from taht, it's a nice site with sweet colors ..

Goog job and good luck
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Old 03-18-2005, 01:49 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Yea,
I agree with every thing thats been said,
i have to say thats an excellent design for your first go.
Keep practicing and you should improve no end.
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Old 03-18-2005, 12:19 PM   #10 (permalink)
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It's cool !I like it!
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Old 03-18-2005, 12:27 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I must say it is not bad for your first site. I agree to remove the flash content on the right hand side as it really serves no purpose. I am not to keen on the global links as it doesn't blend with the rest of the page. What I would recomment is to remove the links from your flash file and re-enter it as a seperate table between the header and the rest of your website.

Just a thought.....A++ for effort!
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Old 03-18-2005, 03:18 PM   #12 (permalink)
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It's a good start.
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