plz review my design(my first design)

pakiboy · 03-17-2005, 12:03 PM

http://php.orgfree.com
plz rewiew my design.how many miss take in design
i m waiting ur commetns
thanks

PoorDoggie · 03-17-2005, 02:25 PM

it looks a little messed up, like the images don't line up.

Also.. what is that flashing thing in the top-right hand corner... I know you mean well, but it is ugly, distracting and annoying.

You have the colors and images right though, just maybe need to tidy it up a bit. Don't use that awful grey color either. Use a nice, pale blue if you can.

Looks good for a first try though!

Tom

sufi · 03-17-2005, 08:56 PM

Design is very good but the flashing image on top right of page sucks.. You should substitute it with something catchy.

Brian · 03-17-2005, 09:06 PM

Like the colors, i wouldn't change them. The flash in the top right, i'd lose that, as i think it takes away from the cleaness of the design. Some of the images don't line up as they should, so you will want to look into that.

Overall for your first design, very good

Regards
Brian

alegend · 03-17-2005, 09:28 PM

images don't line up, and it looks like some of the images where taken from another site.. latest news content box could be fixed up a little. It is very good for your first design though! Good Luck with your others.

joeorgasmic · 03-17-2005, 09:47 PM

Wow, that's you first design? Very very nice. Your html is a bit screwed up and the images don't align quite right, but your headed in a great direction. If this is your first, I can't even imagine what your future ones will look like. Keep it up!

pakiboy · 03-17-2005, 09:52 PM

thanks all of u .now i remove these error which occure in my template
thanks all of u

Petter · 03-17-2005, 11:25 PM

Nice colors and flash movie, but all the bars and gradiates are ****ed up. They are missing pixles and etc. so they need work!

Appart from taht, it's a nice site with sweet colors ..

Goog job and good luck

SB_GEMINI · 03-18-2005, 12:49 AM

Yea,
I agree with every thing thats been said,
i have to say thats an excellent design for your first go.
Keep practicing and you should improve no end.

webgear · 03-18-2005, 11:19 AM

It's cool !I like it!

tferrante · 03-18-2005, 11:27 AM

I must say it is not bad for your first site. I agree to remove the flash content on the right hand side as it really serves no purpose. I am not to keen on the global links as it doesn't blend with the rest of the page. What I would recomment is to remove the links from your flash file and re-enter it as a seperate table between the header and the rest of your website.

Just a thought.....A++ for effort!

voxunity · 03-18-2005, 02:18 PM

It's a good start.

03-17-2005, 12:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
pakiboy NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 62 58.00 NP$ (Donate)	plz review my design(my first design) http://php.orgfree.com plz rewiew my design.how many miss take in design i m waiting ur commetns thanks

03-17-2005, 02:25 PM	#2 (permalink)
PoorDoggie Soon to be RICHdoggie! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: UK Posts: 2,390 316.50 NP$ (Donate)	it looks a little messed up, like the images don't line up. Also.. what is that flashing thing in the top-right hand corner... I know you mean well, but it is ugly, distracting and annoying. You have the colors and images right though, just maybe need to tidy it up a bit. Don't use that awful grey color either. Use a nice, pale blue if you can. Looks good for a first try though! Tom __________________ █ Exchange your long URL for a much smaller one! █ Free Anonymizer/Proxy █ Taz Martin's blog - Learn all about internet marketing, promoting your website and much more!

03-17-2005, 08:56 PM	#3 (permalink)
sufi NamePros Expert Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: LinksHut.com Posts: 7,377 82.88 NP$ (Donate)	Design is very good but the flashing image on top right of page sucks.. You should substitute it with something catchy. __________________ Concrete Polishing FMOZ Web Directory -- Beachside Domains

03-17-2005, 09:06 PM	#4 (permalink)
Brian Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Charlottesville Virginia Posts: 2,277 845.89 NP$ (Donate)	Like the colors, i wouldn't change them. The flash in the top right, i'd lose that, as i think it takes away from the cleaness of the design. Some of the images don't line up as they should, so you will want to look into that. Overall for your first design, very good Regards Brian __________________ Zaux Arcade

03-17-2005, 09:28 PM	#5 (permalink)
alegend PHPHelpSite.com Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 2,586 37.81 NP$ (Donate)	images don't line up, and it looks like some of the images where taken from another site.. latest news content box could be fixed up a little. It is very good for your first design though! Good Luck with your others. __________________ MySpace Stuff - Default MySpace Layouts - Happy Birthday Comments

03-17-2005, 09:47 PM	#6 (permalink)
joeorgasmic NamePros Regular Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Earth Posts: 376 24.15 NP$ (Donate)	Wow, that's you first design? Very very nice. Your html is a bit screwed up and the images don't align quite right, but your headed in a great direction. If this is your first, I can't even imagine what your future ones will look like. Keep it up!

03-17-2005, 09:52 PM	#7 (permalink)
pakiboy NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 62 58.00 NP$ (Donate)	thanks thanks all of u .now i remove these error which occure in my template thanks all of u

03-17-2005, 11:25 PM	#8 (permalink)
Petter This mute print lies Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bergen, Norway Posts: 4,770 78.00 NP$ (Donate)	Nice colors and flash movie, but all the bars and gradiates are ****ed up. They are missing pixles and etc. so they need work! Appart from taht, it's a nice site with sweet colors .. Goog job and good luck

03-18-2005, 12:49 AM	#9 (permalink)
SB_GEMINI NamePros Regular Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Newport, UK Posts: 925 119.25 NP$ (Donate)	Yea, I agree with every thing thats been said, i have to say thats an excellent design for your first go. Keep practicing and you should improve no end. __________________ SB \| Networks eCards4ALL.co.uk \| RobertDeNiroOnline.com \| Simon Barclay - Web/Graphic Designer \| GreatDesigners.Net \| JokeCabin.com \| FawltyTowersOnline.com

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webgear Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: www.greatseotips.com Posts: 3,696 154.25 NP$ (Donate)	It's cool !I like it! __________________ Need SEO help for free ? Check this out ! LiveCasino.In Sedo Auction Play Online Games \| Free Proxy Surfing FOR SALE :BuyAuto.in \| OMV.in \| VPI.in

03-18-2005, 11:27 AM	#11 (permalink)
tferrante NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 25 49.00 NP$ (Donate)	I must say it is not bad for your first site. I agree to remove the flash content on the right hand side as it really serves no purpose. I am not to keen on the global links as it doesn't blend with the rest of the page. What I would recomment is to remove the links from your flash file and re-enter it as a seperate table between the header and the rest of your website. Just a thought.....A++ for effort! __________________ Best Regards www.virtualcreators.ca

03-18-2005, 02:18 PM	#12 (permalink)
voxunity NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 107 95.00 NP$ (Donate)	It's a good start. __________________ Professional Web Design, Web Development

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