Changes made to design

RichardAFCB · 03-13-2005, 04:04 PM

Thanks for all your comments on my previous thread.

I've made a few improvements here:

http://www.clinton-computers.co.uk/newsite/index5.html

What are your thoughts on the design? And before you say it, I'm stuck with the logo unfortunately!

Cheers,

Richard

sufi · 03-13-2005, 08:53 PM

Great design.. Beauty lies in simplicity

alegend · 03-13-2005, 10:41 PM

simple but nice IMO...

Brian · 03-14-2005, 01:20 AM

looks good, well done

SB_GEMINI · 03-14-2005, 02:40 AM

The design is quite nice but i feel you have to much text and not enough eye grabing headlines, images like price reductions, new products etc..

You want something to grab peoples attention, text is good but keep it balanced.
At the moment i have to read alot of text before i really know whats going on.

Look at tiny.com for an example the bold headings imediatly grab my attention and then if i wish to read more i can.

webgear · 03-14-2005, 05:49 AM

Simple and clean.Good job.

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