Try 2!

nameserver · 05-21-2011, 07:03 PM

Ok guys, here is my second attempt at my iPhone site. What do you guys think? Any suggestions?

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PSS_Lena · 05-23-2011, 02:19 AM

It looks plain and simple. The logo is very small. What font did you use?

nameserver · 05-23-2011, 07:00 PM

i don't exactly remember. What you you suggest adding?

**Janine** · 05-23-2011, 08:25 PM

I agree with PSS Lena, the logo is very small. Make use of the remaining spaces. make your slogan bigger too.

Fill your "About Us" widget ( on the footer ) too.

Overall, the layout is clean and the elements are nicely positioned.

for adding "Reactions".

nameserver · 05-27-2011, 03:58 PM

Thank you! I will make the logo bigger and fill the About Us. I put a small place holder in About Us for now but i will add more. But the colors and i guess theme it self. Do you guys think its a decent looking iPhone site?

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nameserver NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Memphis,TN Posts: 135 Follow @iphoneshockwave	i don't exactly remember. What you you suggest adding?

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nameserver NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Memphis,TN Posts: 135 Follow @iphoneshockwave	Thank you! I will make the logo bigger and fill the About Us. I put a small place holder in About Us for now but i will add more. But the colors and i guess theme it self. Do you guys think its a decent looking iPhone site?

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