Please review simple flash sale site

domainstaff · 10-14-2010, 06:00 PM

http://ofallon.me/

Thanks in advance!

winegold · 10-15-2010, 10:31 PM

The font on logo is not so great. You have an eye on one side and a something ? on the other. Why the coffee beans? Center your content to minimize the negative space.

domainstaff · 10-18-2010, 06:23 AM

Originally Posted by winegold

The font on logo is not so great. You have an eye on one side and a something ? on the other. Why the coffee beans? Center your content to minimize the negative space.

Thanks a bunch for the feedback.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/682206-please-review-simple-flash-sale-site.html

Yeah, it's rough and just a simple page.

I will clean it up soon.

TristanH · 10-18-2010, 01:56 PM

It doesn't look very professional at all. There's not really any theme (how do an eye, coffee beans, and a bee go together?), and the hover effect on the links was weird.

I think the logo font is inherently fine, but the page as a whole is pretty... uh... bad.

Clean it up, reduce the clutter, and it will be significantly better. Good luck!

PSS_Lena · 10-19-2010, 12:14 AM

Loads slow or is it just me, I wonder.

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TristanH NamePros Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 43 Follow @TristanHigbee	It doesn't look very professional at all. There's not really any theme (how do an eye, coffee beans, and a bee go together?), and the hover effect on the links was weird. I think the logo font is inherently fine, but the page as a whole is pretty... uh... bad. Clean it up, reduce the clutter, and it will be significantly better. Good luck! __________________ BloggingBookshelf.com A blog about infoproduct creation, digital publishing, and internet marketing

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