Could someone please critique this design?

mknapper1 · 09-01-2010, 12:30 PM

If someone would be willing to give me some feedback i may be willing to hand out a few free np$

**Janine** · 09-02-2010, 03:45 PM

Hey,

I know you don't want your design to be stolen or anything but the watermark is just too much, imho. We couldn't really review the design because of that.

Just one thing I want to add: whatever you do, be wise at spacing; that is an important thing in a design. and Instead of softening the text, just make the effect: none

Goodluck!
- Janine

ToryC103 · 09-08-2010, 05:18 AM

Yea, spacing is an issue. The header image is way too big. There's not really much content to be seen. Decrease your font sizes and add more content.

Kiwidiver · 09-08-2010, 09:35 PM

Nice and very simple. I would think it had limited uses as it dint show enough content. Maybe a few boxes down the side with other content links may help.

Grand Cross · 09-09-2010, 09:23 AM

1. Reduce space of the navigation links at the top
2. Change the Search Icon (the zoom one), looks to fancy (and big)
3. Use a white rounded corners at the bottom
4. Reduce the space between the footer container and the bottom
5. Use this color for the content: #343434 plus the Helveltica font

Small Feedback:
Never watermark these types of images, only logos or isolated elements that can be easily stolen should be watermarked so there isn't any reason for watermaking it.

LikuiD · 09-10-2010, 05:19 AM

I think its simple and good
My only comment is that you just need to reduce the size of the header image, as its taking too much space. Its always better to have your website content display directly on the page without the need of scrolling down.

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Janine Freelance Web Designer Join Date: May 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 3,078 Follow @janinexd	Hey, I know you don't want your design to be stolen or anything but the watermark is just too much, imho. We couldn't really review the design because of that. Just one thing I want to add: whatever you do, be wise at spacing; that is an important thing in a design. and Instead of softening the text, just make the effect: none Goodluck! - Janine __________________ /Freelance Web UI/Graphic Designer/ -- Follow me on Twitter! ☛ ☛ ☛ ☛ Read the NamePros Rules and Terms of Service ☚ ☚ ☚ ☚

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ToryC103 NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 451	Yea, spacing is an issue. The header image is way too big. There's not really much content to be seen. Decrease your font sizes and add more content. __________________ OtherInvestments.com

09-08-2010, 09:35 PM	#4 (permalink)
Kiwidiver New Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Thailand Posts: 8	Nice and very simple. I would think it had limited uses as it dint show enough content. Maybe a few boxes down the side with other content links may help. __________________ Kevin Black http://www.kevinblack.co.uk

09-09-2010, 09:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
Grand Cross NamePros Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Dominican Republic Posts: 66	1. Reduce space of the navigation links at the top 2. Change the Search Icon (the zoom one), looks to fancy (and big) 3. Use a white rounded corners at the bottom 4. Reduce the space between the footer container and the bottom 5. Use this color for the content: #343434 plus the Helveltica font Small Feedback: Never watermark these types of images, only logos or isolated elements that can be easily stolen should be watermarked so there isn't any reason for watermaking it. __________________ Far far away...

09-10-2010, 05:19 AM	#6 (permalink)
LikuiD NamePros Regular Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 283 Follow @DeutschedWeb	I think its simple and good My only comment is that you just need to reduce the size of the header image, as its taking too much space. Its always better to have your website content display directly on the page without the need of scrolling down. __________________ Learn German online for free - German Phrases

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