Review Wanted

thetzfreak · 12-30-2004, 07:23 PM

Hey Guys

I want to start my own general bumper sticker business. I have a template ready (just the basic layout). I just want some ideas on how to fix some stuff or make it look better. If its REALLY not good, can you refer me to a good web designer that does website for cheap?

stickerware.com (more categories will be added, don't worry).

Thanks.

BTW, I know that probably a lot of webmasters are gonna be reading this who probably want my business, so please be fair and not just say: Oh, I can make better ones. Thanks lol.

Nunim · 12-30-2004, 07:56 PM

I can't make better ones

because I am what some people an artistical spaz, but I am good at business. Anyways... The layout is very simple, slow loading also, the all sky blue backround further lowers the value. How about different colors in the backround or in the boxes. Currently its just a big tealish blue blob with some silver boxes. Just my 2 cents.

dannyls · 12-30-2004, 09:35 PM

Erm... good-tutorials.com is all I can say.

arak · 12-30-2004, 09:43 PM

That or head over too www.pixel2life.com hehe its a little too plane. If you were going to go with a plane style then you should have just had tables with dotted lines and just did alot of html, java effects.

I give you 2 star rating out of 10 because honestly this site needs work. It has no feel to it.

mr-x · 12-30-2004, 09:55 PM

Your title graphic is huge (114.04 KB) and slows your page down even on cable.

If you don't know how, have someone with photoshop reduce it for you.

Enchantedragon · 12-31-2004, 05:54 AM

to be honest.. i dont really like , but thats my opinion. Like what nunim said, the sky blue doesnt really give the " business approach" feeling . If it's going to be a bumper sticker business, try adding some enthusiasm into the design, Needs COLOR. And the banner.. i think you need to do some research, and get ideas from other people before puting for own design together. Sorry, jus being honest, the layout of text on the banner is ok, but needs more work done on it. Also, you need a logo, and try to have a color scheme for your business, and stick with it.

Hope this helps, good luck with your business

aretee · 12-31-2004, 06:01 AM

i understand this is only a template...not a final version. But right now it isnt looking very gud im afraid. It does load quite slow, maybe a cartoony, humourous approach is needed for a 'bumper sticker' website. But the layout is gud .... u jus need to make it go together, like i dont think light blue is the right color for the bg, also my font isnt appealing....jus use the force..

se · 12-31-2004, 09:19 AM

the color gives the impression of a beginner....
not business.....

if u want to really pursue this business and go all out...
than i suggest u can another template...diff color...
some more images....and make sure they are small in size

>>www.templatebox.com

thetzfreak · 12-31-2004, 09:40 AM

Thanks for your time guys.

I knew it would't be good from the first place, but I wasn't sure if I was going to get a completely different template. From what u guys have said, I don't think a template like this is going to do. Thanks a lot for your reviews. I think i'm gonna have to get another (a professional eye-grabbing one).

Thanks.

se · 12-31-2004, 09:42 AM

no..probs...u can get templates from here too...

www.deonixdesign.com

12-30-2004, 07:23 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
thetzfreak Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,129	Review Wanted Hey Guys I want to start my own general bumper sticker business. I have a template ready (just the basic layout). I just want some ideas on how to fix some stuff or make it look better. If its REALLY not good, can you refer me to a good web designer that does website for cheap? stickerware.com (more categories will be added, don't worry). Thanks. BTW, I know that probably a lot of webmasters are gonna be reading this who probably want my business, so please be fair and not just say: Oh, I can make better ones. Thanks lol.

12-30-2004, 09:43 PM	#4 (permalink)
arak New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Charlotte, NC Posts: 8	Rating 2 out of 10 That or head over too www.pixel2life.com hehe its a little too plane. If you were going to go with a plane style then you should have just had tables with dotted lines and just did alot of html, java effects. I give you 2 star rating out of 10 because honestly this site needs work. It has no feel to it.

12-31-2004, 06:01 AM	#7 (permalink)
aretee NamePros Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 77	i understand this is only a template...not a final version. But right now it isnt looking very gud im afraid. It does load quite slow, maybe a cartoony, humourous approach is needed for a 'bumper sticker' website. But the layout is gud .... u jus need to make it go together, like i dont think light blue is the right color for the bg, also my font isnt appealing....jus use the force.. Last edited by aretee; 12-31-2004 at 06:04 AM.

12-31-2004, 09:19 AM	#8 (permalink)
se Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: E://my computer/namepros/post.exe Posts: 1,685	the color gives the impression of a beginner.... not business..... if u want to really pursue this business and go all out... than i suggest u can another template...diff color... some more images....and make sure they are small in size >>www.templatebox.com __________________ Cheap Dedicated Server, Free direct Admin Cheap Webhosting :hehe:

12-31-2004, 09:42 AM	#10 (permalink)
se Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: E://my computer/namepros/post.exe Posts: 1,685	no..probs...u can get templates from here too... www.deonixdesign.com __________________ Cheap Dedicated Server, Free direct Admin Cheap Webhosting :hehe:

12-30-2004, 07:56 PM	#2 (permalink)
Nunim NamePros Regular Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 384	I can't make better ones because I am what some people an artistical spaz, but I am good at business. Anyways... The layout is very simple, slow loading also, the all sky blue backround further lowers the value. How about different colors in the backround or in the boxes. Currently its just a big tealish blue blob with some silver boxes. Just my 2 cents.

12-30-2004, 09:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
dannyls Account Suspended Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 44	Erm... good-tutorials.com is all I can say.

12-30-2004, 09:55 PM	#5 (permalink)
mr-x You are here: X Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: US Posts: 483	Your title graphic is huge (114.04 KB) and slows your page down even on cable. If you don't know how, have someone with photoshop reduce it for you.

12-31-2004, 05:54 AM	#6 (permalink)
Enchantedragon NamePros Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: New Zealand Posts: 77	to be honest.. i dont really like , but thats my opinion. Like what nunim said, the sky blue doesnt really give the " business approach" feeling . If it's going to be a bumper sticker business, try adding some enthusiasm into the design, Needs COLOR. And the banner.. i think you need to do some research, and get ideas from other people before puting for own design together. Sorry, jus being honest, the layout of text on the banner is ok, but needs more work done on it. Also, you need a logo, and try to have a color scheme for your business, and stick with it. Hope this helps, good luck with your business

12-31-2004, 09:40 AM	THREAD STARTER #9 (permalink)
thetzfreak Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,129	Thanks for your time guys. I knew it would't be good from the first place, but I wasn't sure if I was going to get a completely different template. From what u guys have said, I don't think a template like this is going to do. Thanks a lot for your reviews. I think i'm gonna have to get another (a professional eye-grabbing one). Thanks.

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