New personal site - Flash

jon · 12-22-2004, 01:12 PM

Hey guys,

This is my first attempt at making a flash website and I am quite pleased with the outcome.

http://www.jonwheatley.co.uk

There isn't a lot of content in there at the moment but that will build up over time. The HTML part of the site has been there a while now but feel free to comment on that also.

Thanks in advanced,
Jon

Archon MkIV · 12-22-2004, 02:07 PM

I like it, though not the scrollbars. They remind me too much of Windows, and don't go too well with the rest of your site. It's minimalistic, so should the scrollbars be.

Other than that, good going!

samscripts · 12-22-2004, 02:41 PM

I like it a lot - very professional - and I like the eyes that follow the mouse around.

There are a couple of things I think might be worth changing:

1) the font size on the text might be too small for some people - especially if using a high resolution.

2) sending you a pm...

overall I think its excellent

Jm12Mc2 · 12-22-2004, 04:24 PM

Very well done, it is very unique. Although the site is great how it currently stands, it could you a little color, but maybe you were going for the black and white scheme.

Anyways, I like it. It is very slick and looks professional.

oblivious · 12-29-2004, 02:05 PM

very nice

thetzfreak · 12-30-2004, 09:38 AM

I like this site. I wish I could do something like that lol.

NICE WORK

jon · 12-30-2004, 10:24 AM

Thanks for the comments guys.

Ber|Art · 12-30-2004, 10:34 AM

Wow, nothing to pick on

very nice and clear site, good work Jon!

waveStorm · 12-30-2004, 02:05 PM

nice!! very minaimalistic.. good flash

jon · 12-30-2004, 02:43 PM

Thanks for the comments.

shivl · 01-02-2005, 11:21 AM

-transitions of the masks are slow, not to mention typical. Use a higher framerate or less frames.

-I wonder if you really preload...When i've clicked an item before, it says loading again...for the same amount of time

-You use the standard scrollers of mx2004...easy job, and there are way too many scrollers....I saw even two scrollers in one big scroll.

-overall layout is nice & clean, yet maybe to simple. Didn't like the red capitals.

-As it is your first flashthingy...still...nicely done.

12-22-2004, 01:12 PM	#1 (permalink)
jon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: uk Posts: 1,391 1,547.75 NP$ (Donate)	New personal site - Flash Hey guys, This is my first attempt at making a flash website and I am quite pleased with the outcome. http://www.jonwheatley.co.uk There isn't a lot of content in there at the moment but that will build up over time. The HTML part of the site has been there a while now but feel free to comment on that also. Thanks in advanced, Jon __________________ ► j0n.org

12-22-2004, 02:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
samscripts NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Canterbury, UK Posts: 99 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	I like it a lot - very professional - and I like the eyes that follow the mouse around. There are a couple of things I think might be worth changing: 1) the font size on the text might be too small for some people - especially if using a high resolution. 2) sending you a pm... overall I think its excellent __________________ Free image hosting script Free whois software php whois script

12-30-2004, 10:24 AM	#7 (permalink)
jon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: uk Posts: 1,391 1,547.75 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks for the comments guys. __________________ ► j0n.org

12-30-2004, 10:34 AM	#8 (permalink)
Ber\|Art Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: the Netherlands Posts: 1,583 97.85 NP$ (Donate)	Wow, nothing to pick on very nice and clear site, good work Jon! __________________ Berrie Pelser Ber\|Art Visual Design (www.ber-art.nl) DNOA Member LinkedIN Profile

12-30-2004, 02:05 PM	#9 (permalink)
waveStorm New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 19 17.00 NP$ (Donate)	nice!! very minaimalistic.. good flash __________________ WaveStorm Computer Systems Inc.

12-22-2004, 02:07 PM	#2 (permalink)
Archon MkIV New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 12 24.00 NP$ (Donate)	I like it, though not the scrollbars. They remind me too much of Windows, and don't go too well with the rest of your site. It's minimalistic, so should the scrollbars be. Other than that, good going!

12-22-2004, 04:24 PM	#4 (permalink)
Jm12Mc2 New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 14.00 NP$ (Donate)	Very well done, it is very unique. Although the site is great how it currently stands, it could you a little color, but maybe you were going for the black and white scheme. Anyways, I like it. It is very slick and looks professional.

12-29-2004, 02:05 PM	#5 (permalink)
oblivious NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 181 312.00 NP$ (Donate)	very nice

12-30-2004, 09:38 AM	#6 (permalink)
thetzfreak Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,140 281.00 NP$ (Donate)	I like this site. I wish I could do something like that lol. NICE WORK

12-30-2004, 02:43 PM	#10 (permalink)
jon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: uk Posts: 1,391 1,547.75 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks for the comments. __________________ ► j0n.org

01-02-2005, 11:21 AM	#11 (permalink)
shivl New Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Belgium Posts: 17 34.00 NP$ (Donate)	-transitions of the masks are slow, not to mention typical. Use a higher framerate or less frames. -I wonder if you really preload...When i've clicked an item before, it says loading again...for the same amount of time -You use the standard scrollers of mx2004...easy job, and there are way too many scrollers....I saw even two scrollers in one big scroll. -overall layout is nice & clean, yet maybe to simple. Didn't like the red capitals. -As it is your first flashthingy...still...nicely done. __________________ www.shivliz.com

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