Soaring-Designs v3 Concept.

Jm12Mc2 · 12-20-2004, 12:59 PM

Myself as well as others who work for Soaring Designs have been working very hard to create version 3 of the soaring designs website.

Our last 2 versions were so-so but we are looking to design something very clean and stylish for version 3.

We have about 5 concepts right now, here is one I knew the URL to offhand.

Version 3 - Take 1

I'll post more concepts later on, but for know what do you think about this design?

Rowan W · 12-20-2004, 05:53 PM

Hello, this design has a lot of potential; the colours are nice and the layout is easy to understand.

However everything seems to be very loose, possibly caused by the different and wide sized gaps between each table. You should try to make everything fit tightly and comfortably together so it doesn't look like it's about to fall apart.

Also the title, Soarina (edit: should it be Soaring?), looks very awkward there with its bottom half cut off. It looks like you made it as a background image and then all the table cells were squashed together.

But overall I do like this design, it just needs some tweaking.

Rowan

tcarr · 12-20-2004, 10:04 PM

I agree with Rowan W about the text on the left. Other than that, it looks calm and quite nice. I think once filled with content it'll be a pleasant sight to visit.

Maybe you could use your existing logo instead where the large text on the left is.

12-20-2004, 12:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jm12Mc2 New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 14.00 NP$ (Donate)	Soaring-Designs v3 Concept. Myself as well as others who work for Soaring Designs have been working very hard to create version 3 of the soaring designs website. Our last 2 versions were so-so but we are looking to design something very clean and stylish for version 3. We have about 5 concepts right now, here is one I knew the URL to offhand. Version 3 - Take 1 I'll post more concepts later on, but for know what do you think about this design?

12-20-2004, 05:53 PM	#2 (permalink)
Rowan W NamePros Regular Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: QLD, Australia Posts: 713 1,869.00 NP$ (Donate)	Hello, this design has a lot of potential; the colours are nice and the layout is easy to understand. However everything seems to be very loose, possibly caused by the different and wide sized gaps between each table. You should try to make everything fit tightly and comfortably together so it doesn't look like it's about to fall apart. Also the title, Soarina (edit: should it be Soaring?), looks very awkward there with its bottom half cut off. It looks like you made it as a background image and then all the table cells were squashed together. But overall I do like this design, it just needs some tweaking. Rowan

12-20-2004, 10:04 PM	#3 (permalink)
tcarr NamePros Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 35 61.00 NP$ (Donate)	I agree with Rowan W about the text on the left. Other than that, it looks calm and quite nice. I think once filled with content it'll be a pleasant sight to visit. Maybe you could use your existing logo instead where the large text on the left is.

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