Please critique my design Updated - 14 Dec

Rowan W · 12-12-2004, 08:39 PM

*update in next post*

Hello, I'm currently trying to create a fresh new design for my website. This design is minimalistic and is only an image at the moment, so you can't do anything but look at it.

I'm not quite happy with the way it is currently, so any advice/suggestions would be appreciated.

http://www.estorm.com.au/Gallery/layout_v2.htm

Thanks.

Rowan W · 12-14-2004, 04:51 AM

I've updated my design - http://www.rowansgallery.com

Please give me some harsh and honest opinions.

btw, only the index page and contact pages work so far.

wizdude · 12-14-2004, 05:23 AM

I like it...but move the content down. I am not fond of the orange text, but adding in the hint of colour isnt a bad idea. Just move the main content down, and try using Arial size 2 as your font. Good design, and good luck!

Rowan W · 12-14-2004, 06:11 AM

Thanks, your suggestion was most helpful.

inflames · 12-14-2004, 08:49 AM

looks pretty good IMO
wouldnt change a thing

12-12-2004, 08:39 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
Rowan W NamePros Regular Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: QLD, Australia Posts: 713	Please critique my design Updated - 14 Dec update in next post Hello, I'm currently trying to create a fresh new design for my website. This design is minimalistic and is only an image at the moment, so you can't do anything but look at it. I'm not quite happy with the way it is currently, so any advice/suggestions would be appreciated. http://www.estorm.com.au/Gallery/layout_v2.htm Thanks. Last edited by Rowan W; 12-14-2004 at 04:54 AM.

12-14-2004, 04:51 AM	THREAD STARTER #2 (permalink)
Rowan W NamePros Regular Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: QLD, Australia Posts: 713	Update I've updated my design - http://www.rowansgallery.com Please give me some harsh and honest opinions. btw, only the index page and contact pages work so far.

12-14-2004, 05:23 AM	#3 (permalink)
wizdude NamePros Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 76	I like it...but move the content down. I am not fond of the orange text, but adding in the hint of colour isnt a bad idea. Just move the main content down, and try using Arial size 2 as your font. Good design, and good luck! __________________ :music: Wizdude My first personal website! Please tell me what you think! :music:

12-14-2004, 06:11 AM	THREAD STARTER #4 (permalink)
Rowan W NamePros Regular Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: QLD, Australia Posts: 713	Thanks, your suggestion was most helpful.

12-14-2004, 08:49 AM	#5 (permalink)
inflames Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: PA Posts: 1,339	looks pretty good IMO wouldnt change a thing

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