ciritique my site PLEASE

jojojobro · 06-29-2009, 05:29 PM

hello been working on this page for a while and wanted an opinon about it style wise

Thanksjonas brothers

superfly1 · 07-01-2009, 05:22 AM

I'm sorry to tell you this but it's not even close to be "a design", it's only a gray background with a few pictures and text...

If you want to improve it - I think you should hire a real designer.

peterum02 · 07-12-2009, 08:26 PM

I would have to agree with superfly... xwork more for the design............

jgalty · 07-14-2009, 01:51 AM

You should look into using wordpress since it's really simple and will organize all your pictures and stuff for you.

JayMay · 08-27-2009, 10:53 AM

The design of the site needs work. I'd suggest getting someone to do it for you. Or, try wordpress like the person above suggested. They have hundreds of hundreds of theme already available for free.

Also, I would suggest having a menu bar for the 'news' 'lyrics' 'video' and all that. Instead of having it go up and down in the middle of the page there, have it go left to right like an actual menu bar.

Good luck with your site.

Trens · 08-27-2009, 07:42 PM

To be designwise it needs further improvemnnt. otherwise it is good.

bodil4o · 08-29-2009, 10:23 AM

It is well designed good colour and added nice looking pictures ,but you have to make it a bit not that wide...
For me it is too wide - if you have 19' monitor it looks good but if it is 17' it looks so crowded ,so I think you should reconstruct the information part of the page = the column /JONAS BROTHERS CONCERT LISTINGS

Jonas Brothers
Date - 07/19/09
Venue - Nassau Coliseum
Location
..../

EzhilArasu · 09-01-2009, 12:45 PM

Hi,

heavy graphic design is used. Dark & sexy red used as background. Best quality images used.

White fonts look elegant with red background. Great clarity.

But in the right side lot of space is left which can be used for Ad purpose. Content is not lthere.

You can write web content relevant to this site. place some banners, tweasers, textlinks etc.

It will drive traffic too.

Thanx,

Ezhil_09

jj2ii3344 · 09-01-2009, 02:56 PM

Main page

I actually like the color theme you are using on your main page - elegant and simple. This type/style of design, however, usually doesn't work well with large sites with many pages. But for your purpose, I think it looks great.

Sub pages

Too dull and plain as suggested by other members in the community.

kifli4ka · 09-05-2009, 06:41 AM

I like it

The color theme is nice and all the placements things are very well placed

Really cool!
10/10

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JayMay NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 44	The design of the site needs work. I'd suggest getting someone to do it for you. Or, try wordpress like the person above suggested. They have hundreds of hundreds of theme already available for free. Also, I would suggest having a menu bar for the 'news' 'lyrics' 'video' and all that. Instead of having it go up and down in the middle of the page there, have it go left to right like an actual menu bar. Good luck with your site. __________________ Looking for a great deal on Social Media? I got just the thing for you!

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Trens Account Closed Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 58	To be designwise it needs further improvemnnt. otherwise it is good.

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bodil4o Account Closed Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 164	It is well designed good colour and added nice looking pictures ,but you have to make it a bit not that wide... For me it is too wide - if you have 19' monitor it looks good but if it is 17' it looks so crowded ,so I think you should reconstruct the information part of the page = the column /JONAS BROTHERS CONCERT LISTINGS Jonas Brothers Date - 07/19/09 Venue - Nassau Coliseum Location ..../

09-01-2009, 12:45 PM	#8 (permalink)
EzhilArasu NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Mohali - India Posts: 27 Follow @EzhilArasu	ciritique my site PLEASE Hi, heavy graphic design is used. Dark & sexy red used as background. Best quality images used. White fonts look elegant with red background. Great clarity. But in the right side lot of space is left which can be used for Ad purpose. Content is not lthere. You can write web content relevant to this site. place some banners, tweasers, textlinks etc. It will drive traffic too. Thanx, Ezhil_09

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jj2ii3344 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Markham, Ontario, Canada Posts: 3,370	Main page I actually like the color theme you are using on your main page - elegant and simple. This type/style of design, however, usually doesn't work well with large sites with many pages. But for your purpose, I think it looks great. Sub pages Too dull and plain as suggested by other members in the community. __________________ www.canonlens.ws Updated daily - Get Canon lens reviews and good deals on new/used Canon lens from CanonLens.ws![/SIZE]

09-05-2009, 06:41 AM	#10 (permalink)
kifli4ka Account Closed Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 75	I like it The color theme is nice and all the placements things are very well placed Really cool! 10/10

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