steadler

thanks, please rate out of 10, still updating with my work but the general layout, you get the idea.

please click around to check out the features also.

Regards,
Paul

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steadler

not one review, it takes 2 seconds to click a link lol

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-Nick-

Maybe people are wondering where the link is

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steadler

lol it is in my signiture Untitled Designd, or go to Pstead.com

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redslazers

Here are my comments

1. The logo box at the top looks unfinished because it just kinda fades away

2. Reproof your spelling there are numerous mistakes

3.Add a fav.ico

4. Make sure your portfolio pictures fit into their boxes because they are cut off and dont really inspire people to click on them

5.Services and Get in touch boxes are under each other rather than next to each other.

Other wise nice work and i like the name you have picked "untitled Design"

evytaar

Hello Steadler,

your design is nice and simple, tThese are my reviews for your site:

• The header, it will be better if the header padding/margin on top is small. I mean you can decrease it smaller. For the color, I think it would be nice if you use lighter gray than this one

• for featured work, you can use an icon or picture for next and previous option, I can't see the font well. If you use a bigger narrow with elegant design, it's better

• For picture gallery, I would like to see a border on the image. perhaps 3px or 4px border with light or dark color is nice, so we can see the differences between one picture to another. And the bottom-top gap/distance between the picture is better if you use bigger number or at least balance with left and right distance

• finally, for contact form, I saw that the contact form is under the page, not in 'get in touch' area. maybe you can decrease the width

????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/592149-please-review-my-new-portfolio.html
Sorry for these review, but I'm sure if you edit small your site, the protfolio will look great. ^_^

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steadler

thanks for the feedback, and i do agree with alot of the changes you have suggested and i will work towards changing them.

As for the get in touch area, i have tried and tried to get the contact box there but i am unable to lol. I do not know why it will not fit

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andr69

The design is not professional I think. Try to fix it.

Ookie

Hey Paul,

Tbh and to the point, your site doesn't look at all professional... :/

I will give a deeper review later... off to bed right now. *yawns*

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Ookie

Ok, a more indepth review...
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=592149

The header looks boring, and the drop shadow is wayyyyyyyyy to strong. I like the logo, but why have two names one next to the other and why use a serif font on one side and a sans serif on the other side? All of the fonts on the rest are sans serif (arial) so why use a serif in one spot? It also looks weird in the way that if fades off at the top.

Now, critique on the rest of the site....

The background is wayyyy to desaturated and the clouds look really fake... I would make the bg more saturated, put the cloud brushes on and then add a soft drop shadow set to overlay.

The other thing that stands out, is that everything is floating.... why not put some boxes on there to hold the content?

If I were you, I would have a more than one page site, OR put your services at the top and then your featured work.

In regards to the contact form, how are you trying to get it right? If it were me, I would float your services left and the contact page right, but put the contact box before the services in the code and that should fix it.

TBH, it looks very unfinished and unprofessional.

Don't take this personally, but that's just my opinion.

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steadler

i appreciate your reviews and critiques everyone, i am currently re working on a new design, hopefully i will get it right this time lol, i suck at coding so i knocked it up with minimum knowledge in that field.

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Ookie

You're welcome! =D

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