please review a new san francisco web site

**John Baron** · 06-18-2009, 01:19 PM

hey guys i am working on a new san francisco travel site
it does not have enough content in it yet , but the layout is done, be really happy to get your comments and please if needed be brutal

thanks

san francisco motels and info

cheers

**John Baron** · 07-01-2009, 08:23 AM

let's try it again

Zaano.com · 07-01-2009, 11:53 AM

To me it looks a bit dull and crowded. Try adding some color to the design.

**John Baron** · 07-01-2009, 12:48 PM

Originally Posted by Zaano.com

To me it looks a bit dull and crowded. Try adding some color to the design.

thanks for the review
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/590834-please-review-new-san-francisco-web.html
any one else ?

Bodhi · 07-01-2009, 03:38 PM

Very nice looking site on a great domain name. Looks awesome to me, It is obvious you have spent a lot of time on the site and I think it really looks professional. I don't have any real negative feedback, the only thing that comes to mind is that the google search might look better above the google ad block that it is currently under and maybe shift the block with the 6 hotels (bottom right) up a bit as well so they align better with the content on their left.

Very well done!

edit: Just FYI, I viewed your site in Firefox and IE and it looks the same in both without any issues.

**John Baron** · 07-01-2009, 04:12 PM

Originally Posted by Bodhi

Very nice looking site on a great domain name. Looks awesome to me, It is obvious you have spent a lot of time on the site and I think it really looks professional. I don't have any real negative feedback, the only thing that comes to mind is that the google search might look better above the google ad block that it is currently under and maybe shift the block with the 6 hotels (bottom right) up a bit as well so they align better with the content on their left.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=590834

Very well done!

edit: Just FYI, I viewed your site in Firefox and IE and it looks the same in both without any issues.

Thanks for the detailed review !

rep !
thanks for telling me about the problem in the bottom , i just fix it .
cheers

**John Baron** · 07-13-2009, 04:40 AM

made some changes , be happy to get some more reviews

Bodhi · 07-13-2009, 04:31 PM

Don't shoot me, but I think it looked cleaner before.

**John Baron** · 07-13-2009, 09:58 PM

Originally Posted by Bodhi

Don't shoot me, but I think it looked cleaner before.

which area?

Bodhi · 07-14-2009, 05:44 PM

Originally Posted by liror

which area?

It is hard to say exactly, many days have past since I saw the original site. If you have a screen shot of the prior version that you can PM me I will do my best and look at the new site and the old one and give a critique. It will only be my opinion, but I will take the time to look at the different versions and give you feedback if you want.

scriptillusion · 07-16-2009, 08:33 AM

The site looks outstanding and definitely a top notch domain name to go with it. If there was anything at all that could use improvement is maybe making more pronounced borders around the differing sections. Maybe make it similar to one of the other pages here: Entertainment | sfca where you have a light gray bar where the post date and such is located between posts. Nothing to drastic, but gives it enough to break the page up a bit.

Nice site though!

**John Baron** · 07-16-2009, 08:47 AM

interesting advise , i will try it
thanks a lot for your review ! rep !

Originally Posted by scriptillusion

The site looks outstanding and definitely a top notch domain name to go with it. If there was anything at all that could use improvement is maybe making more pronounced borders around the differing sections. Maybe make it similar to one of the other pages here: Entertainment | sfca where you have a light gray bar where the post date and such is located between posts. Nothing to drastic, but gives it enough to break the page up a bit.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=590834

Nice site though!

andr69 · 07-17-2009, 05:25 AM

Well, I can't agree it's dull, The color is bright, the pictures are very nice, I like it!

**John Baron** · 07-23-2009, 07:25 AM

Originally Posted by andr69

Well, I can't agree it's dull, The color is bright, the pictures are very nice, I like it!

thanks for the review

builder40 · 07-24-2009, 08:45 AM

Hi,

Nice clean site, with text in areas of 4x4 cm, easy to read,

maybe do 1. colourful graphic on the page somewhere, i always try to do 1 per page if i have aclean whait site.

Larry Fling · 07-30-2009, 01:59 AM

Looks nice and complete.. i would work on the logo a bit.. looks too amateurish..
Great site!

alibaba · 08-07-2009, 09:59 AM

not clean but certainly pro job

The Restorer · 08-07-2009, 10:38 AM

It looks pretty good.

Good work.

JayMay · 08-27-2009, 10:50 AM

First off I like the layout, looks very professional. Your logo seems a little blurry though, like its not the highest quality.

I think you have something though, really seems professional looking. Good job.

Trens · 08-27-2009, 07:40 PM

In contentwise the site is really good and on the design wise you have to improve it and make a good design.

bodil4o · 08-28-2009, 02:38 AM

It is good but I think you should buy a logo for it...

manqka · 08-28-2009, 02:52 AM

Great domain! Looks good

Maybe one day I'll come to San Francisco

kifli4ka · 09-05-2009, 07:42 AM

Nice site - idea and design but It took me 2 minutest to load it and 20 sek later the header blinked

To sum up good site but it needs new hosting..

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07-01-2009, 03:38 PM	#5 (permalink)
Bodhi Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 3,129	Very nice looking site on a great domain name. Looks awesome to me, It is obvious you have spent a lot of time on the site and I think it really looks professional. I don't have any real negative feedback, the only thing that comes to mind is that the google search might look better above the google ad block that it is currently under and maybe shift the block with the 6 hotels (bottom right) up a bit as well so they align better with the content on their left. Very well done! edit: Just FYI, I viewed your site in Firefox and IE and it looks the same in both without any issues. Last edited by Bodhi; 07-01-2009 at 03:49 PM.

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07-16-2009, 08:33 AM	#11 (permalink)
scriptillusion NamePros Regular Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 236	The site looks outstanding and definitely a top notch domain name to go with it. If there was anything at all that could use improvement is maybe making more pronounced borders around the differing sections. Maybe make it similar to one of the other pages here: Entertainment \| sfca where you have a light gray bar where the post date and such is located between posts. Nothing to drastic, but gives it enough to break the page up a bit. Nice site though! __________________ PHP Scripts and Webmaster Tools at scriptillusion.com Forget Single Source Automated Content - You need AutoMegaContent! Santa Clarita Real Estate

07-01-2009, 11:53 AM	#3 (permalink)
Zaano.com Account Closed Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 8	To me it looks a bit dull and crowded. Try adding some color to the design.

07-13-2009, 04:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
Bodhi Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 3,129	Don't shoot me, but I think it looked cleaner before.

07-17-2009, 05:25 AM	#13 (permalink)
andr69 Account Closed Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Russia Posts: 622	Well, I can't agree it's dull, The color is bright, the pictures are very nice, I like it!

07-24-2009, 08:45 AM	#15 (permalink)
builder40 New Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6	Clean site Hi, Nice clean site, with text in areas of 4x4 cm, easy to read, maybe do 1. colourful graphic on the page somewhere, i always try to do 1 per page if i have aclean whait site.

07-30-2009, 01:59 AM	#16 (permalink)
Larry Fling Senior Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: LarryFling.com Posts: 2,274	Looks nice and complete.. i would work on the logo a bit.. looks too amateurish.. Great site! __________________ DNSearch.net - Search for Available Domain Names Instantly! LarryFling.com - Coming Soon!

08-07-2009, 09:59 AM	#17 (permalink)
alibaba NamePros Regular Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 299	not clean but certainly pro job

08-07-2009, 10:38 AM	#18 (permalink)
The Restorer NamePros Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Oldham, UK Posts: 169	It looks pretty good. Good work. __________________ Trade Shows

08-27-2009, 10:50 AM	#19 (permalink)
JayMay NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 44	First off I like the layout, looks very professional. Your logo seems a little blurry though, like its not the highest quality. I think you have something though, really seems professional looking. Good job. __________________ Looking for a great deal on Social Media? I got just the thing for you!

08-27-2009, 07:40 PM	#20 (permalink)
Trens Account Closed Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 58	In contentwise the site is really good and on the design wise you have to improve it and make a good design.

08-28-2009, 02:38 AM	#21 (permalink)
bodil4o Account Closed Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 164	It is good but I think you should buy a logo for it...

08-28-2009, 02:52 AM	#22 (permalink)
manqka NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 26	Great domain! Looks good Maybe one day I'll come to San Francisco

09-05-2009, 07:42 AM	#23 (permalink)
kifli4ka Account Closed Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 75	Nice site - idea and design but It took me 2 minutest to load it and 20 sek later the header blinked To sum up good site but it needs new hosting..

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