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Old 05-31-2009, 09:34 AM THREAD STARTER               #1 (permalink)
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Please review my website and ebook, thanks!


Hi there everyone,

I have a domain flipping site at The Ultimate Guide to Domain Name Flipping I would sincerly appreciate if you could review it, let me know your thoughts. I am very open to comments and suggestions on improvement. There is also a free preview of the ebook on the site. You can access it at http://www.domainsflip.com/domainflippingpreview.pdf
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Please tell me what you think needs to be improved or changed to make it a great site!

Thank you so much in advance, looking forward to hearing from you!

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Old 05-31-2009, 10:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Great eBook to start with, its very neat and professionally written. But from my point of view, It could be nice to have pictures or screenshots in the preview, at the moment, its pretty much plain text (perhaps screenshots of earnings from domain flipping would be a confidence booster).

The website is also nice but I think you could have a better sales landing page (feedback on your index page rather than a seperate page will be better). I couldnt find a way back to the Index page from when I enter another page. I think the "contact" should lead you to a page with the different ways that people can reach you other than by email. The text is also 'too small', take it up a notch to make it easier to read. Finally, I think the hit counter is alittle soon to place because with small figures, it could make people feel unsafe from purchasing it because there have been already any visitors and make the site feel like a 'ghost' town.
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Other than that, good luck
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Old 05-31-2009, 02:48 PM THREAD STARTER               #3 (permalink)
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Thank you very much Captain Tycoon for your prompt and honest feedback, it means a lot to me. I am presently in the process of improving the sales page, to make it more friendlier and easier to Navigate. I will make sure there is a way to get back to the home page and also improve the contacts, photos / charts of domain flipping earnings.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=586856

Did anyone notice the free ebooks portion of the site? Or should I try to make this much more visible and 'eye-catching?" I felt that a free ebook package would entice potential buyers of the ebook. What do you think?

I'm not sure if I have too many links that draw customers off the main site page, I am open to comments / suggestion? I have also tried to spruce up the page with some keywords, to help with Google search. Anyone with other ideas would be most welcome!
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????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=586856
I'm not sure if I have too many links that draw customers off the main site page, I am open to comments / suggestion? I have also tried to spruce up the page with some keywords, to help with Google search. Anyone with other ideas would be most welcome!
1/ Lose the counter - So 1990's
2/ Separate landing page with more info about e-book
3/ links to other resource sites.
4/ Maybe a RSS feed from Sedo / Aftermarket.com showing recent sales
5/ 1mprove the site look as it is a little plain at present.
otherwise good site
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Old 05-31-2009, 05:03 PM THREAD STARTER               #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Barefoottech View Post
1/ Lose the counter - So 1990's
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2/ Separate landing page with more info about e-book
3/ links to other resource sites.
4/ Maybe a RSS feed from Sedo / Aftermarket.com showing recent sales
5/ 1mprove the site look as it is a little plain at present.
otherwise good site
Thank you Barefoottech - I appreciate the feedback, I have already removed the counter, I understand what you were saying, I was just trying to track to see how many visitors I had / sales conversions, and decided to use a hidden counter instead for this. I am in the process if improving the look and feel of the site, please keep the comments and feedback coming in, I am really enjoying them and this is helping me to make significant improvements. Thanks to everyone!!
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Glad I could help. I saw the changes you've made so far and it looks alot better when you changed the font size. I have a few more tips

I would say to get rid of "More Free ebooks coming soon....." on the 'free ebooks with purchase' page because that might have a small effect to make your visitors perhaps wait for more ebooks to show up on the list before they buy (by that time, they may have forgotten about your product).

I thinking adding a 'Value' tag on each of the Free eBooks would encourage your visitors even more to purchase your product. e.g. "The 90 Day Ebay Powerseller Challenge - Worth $99!"...etc. It makes them feel that they are getting more out of their money.

A final suggestion from me that I could think of is that you should make visitors have to subscribe to your email list to recieve the Preview eBook. This is great for marketing because you will be able to use their email addresses to perhaps notify them of your new products, updates...etc. If they have viewed the preview book and not purchased it, you can then perhaps notify them of discounts...etc.
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Thank you very much Captain Tycoon for your prompt and honest feedback, it means a lot to me. I am presently in the process of improving the sales page, to make it more friendlier and easier to Navigate. I will make sure there is a way to get back to the home page and also improve the contacts, photos / charts of domain flipping earnings.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=586856

Did anyone notice the free ebooks portion of the site? Or should I try to make this much more visible and 'eye-catching?" I felt that a free ebook package would entice potential buyers of the ebook. What do you think?

I'm not sure if I have too many links that draw customers off the main site page, I am open to comments / suggestion? I have also tried to spruce up the page with some keywords, to help with Google search. Anyone with other ideas would be most welcome!
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There is very tie design in your page. It`s not bad but and is`n good. try fix it
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Old 06-01-2009, 11:42 AM THREAD STARTER               #8 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by andr69 View Post
There is very tie design in your page. It`s not bad but and is`n good. try fix it
Hi andr69, thanks for your response, please forgive me, but I'm not sure what you mean when you say "tie design" in the page. Hope you could clarify for me? Thank you for checking it out!
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Old 06-20-2009, 02:07 PM THREAD STARTER               #9 (permalink)
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I have changed many aspects of the sales page at this time, would appreciate if anyone can have some other comments on the structure, layout of the site.

Can I ask, if you visited this site for the first time, would you buy? The site is at Domain Flipping
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