Doesn't do it at all for me. Font too small, adsense overload, miniature URL bar, no accents on the graphic side of things, even less on the colors - all in all, and i completely respect the fact that this is not a template made by you, i'd immediately change the visual appearance to something more unique. Emphasizing the URL bad, compiling adsense in smart places - peripheral field of vision - and introduce some decent colors to your site. Last but not least, come up with a distinct logo and favicon.
Maybe that was a bit harsh altogether, but in all essence, you could/should have a much better laid out and designed product.
M.
