Fast Food Site, Please Review

Chef Patrick · 08-15-2008, 07:32 PM

I am pretty much done with my new mini-site and would truly appreciate your reviews.

Let me know what you think good or bad.

For content I started off with four articles and then will add two articles a week to build PR.

FastFoodHelp.com

tight-aggressive · 08-15-2008, 07:56 PM

Well, the google ads don't show up with relevant info - I'm getting wordpress/archives ads...

I think once you have enough posts to consider your site directory - that will be great.

Also maybe a section about about how healthy each place is would be nicely picked up in search engines.

- even the raw data available from their menus

Chef Patrick · 08-15-2008, 08:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tight-aggressive

Well, the google ads don't show up with relevant info - I'm getting wordpress/archives ads...

Thanks, I am working on this issue now. For some reason google ads is not picking up the content on the home page, really making me mad...lol

priyakochin · 08-16-2008, 02:48 AM

simple but professional design.
You may try to add some more colorful header!

randyhenson · 08-16-2008, 05:59 PM

Nice and clean layout. I would maybe add some fast food logos in the background of your header or something to fill in some of the white space.

**Ross** · 08-16-2008, 10:30 PM

This is a cool and fun niche to play in. Thought about building a couple websites here myself. The only thing holding me back is im not sure about the advertising part of it. For the design itself, i love the simplicity a lot. The colors mesh well together and flow nicely down the page. Obviously the blank space will have to be worked out with something weather it be widgets or ads. The google ads are place nicely and i love the one that looks like a nav bar, used that one many times in the past and pays off big. As randy said, the header could use some more bang to it but the logo itself is great.

An idea for a static page would be to compare calories and health information on leading meals at the restaurants such as a big mac and a quad stacker.

Love the niche and the design.

Good Luck!

weblord · 08-17-2008, 11:42 PM

lots of wasted space on vertical left column, maybe you could put some feeds there the content archive, overall ok.

Chef Patrick · 08-18-2008, 06:30 PM

thank you, rep added if possible. some wouldn't let me because i have already given to a few of you.

i will add some more ads within the next few days which will fill in whatever empty spaces.

Quote:

Originally Posted by randyhenson

Nice and clean layout. I would maybe add some fast food logos in the background of your header or something to fill in some of the white space.

using the fast food logos may be a trademark issue.

randyhenson · 08-18-2008, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DomainSubway

using the fast food logos may be a trademark issue.

I think as long as your not trashing there name or brand, It would not hurt to fade some logos into your background. The worst thing they can do is ask, You to remove it.

Chef Patrick · 08-22-2008, 10:02 AM

thanks everyone, finished updating everything. added ads and adsense working now. take a look at the finished product and let me know what you think please.

sidfromla · 08-22-2008, 11:32 PM

very nice , site has a nice clean layout and everything seems to be working fine.

linkbuildr · 08-23-2008, 12:05 AM

very nice minimal design..looks classy!

Chef Patrick · 08-28-2008, 10:47 AM

thank you linkbuildr and sidfromla...

gemstar · 08-28-2008, 11:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DomainSubway

I am pretty much done with my new mini-site and would truly appreciate your reviews.

Let me know what you think good or bad.

For content I started off with four articles and then will add two articles a week to build PR.

FastFoodHelp.com

You forgot to add ChineseFastFood.com

Good job!

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randyhenson NamePros Regular Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Potosi, Mo Posts: 234 210.00 NP$ (Donate)	Nice and clean layout. I would maybe add some fast food logos in the background of your header or something to fill in some of the white space. __________________ faxfreeonline.com

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Ross NP Superstar™ Forum Moderator Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2,068 255.15 NP$ (Donate)	This is a cool and fun niche to play in. Thought about building a couple websites here myself. The only thing holding me back is im not sure about the advertising part of it. For the design itself, i love the simplicity a lot. The colors mesh well together and flow nicely down the page. Obviously the blank space will have to be worked out with something weather it be widgets or ads. The google ads are place nicely and i love the one that looks like a nav bar, used that one many times in the past and pays off big. As randy said, the header could use some more bang to it but the logo itself is great. An idea for a static page would be to compare calories and health information on leading meals at the restaurants such as a big mac and a quad stacker. Love the niche and the design. Good Luck! __________________ YGrab.com Domaining BLOG!

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Chef Patrick ChefPatrick.com Join Date: May 2008 Location: Orlando, FL Posts: 2,051 2,506.72 NP$ (Donate)	thanks everyone, finished updating everything. added ads and adsense working now. take a look at the finished product and let me know what you think please. __________________ ChefPatrick.com My Blog ---> Thank you to all my NP readers ViralSignUp.com - Your Newsletter Has Now Gone Viral!!! DomainSubway.com My Domain Portfolio

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tight-aggressive Account Closed Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,967 801.35 NP$ (Donate)	Well, the google ads don't show up with relevant info - I'm getting wordpress/archives ads... I think once you have enough posts to consider your site directory - that will be great. Also maybe a section about about how healthy each place is would be nicely picked up in search engines. - even the raw data available from their menus

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weblord NamePros Legend Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Philippines - www.Nabaza.com Posts: 19,840 21,700.43 NP$ (Donate)	lots of wasted space on vertical left column, maybe you could put some feeds there the content archive, overall ok.

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sidfromla New Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 2 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	very nice , site has a nice clean layout and everything seems to be working fine. __________________ www.mafiatoday.com www.favoritebeers101.com

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